I Came for the Red Mansion

I really can't hold on anymore. The protagonist's personality seems to be kind. Once the plot involves scolding Jia Huan and beating Xue Pan, it's a bit baffling. The reason for getting angry is simply a bit low-level? There is also a problem with studying. The Jia family has family studies. Do they need to spend money to study elsewhere? The protagonist's conversations with others are all vernacular. How can you still find feeling when writing poetry? It feels like these two words are words from Red Mansions? From beginning to end, there is no psychological description of the protagonist at all? It seems straightforward, like someone else is telling a story, not like a novel at all. The plot has no ups and downs, and the writing is not like a Red Mansion novel, but more like a farming novel. The overall level may not even be half as good as other people's Red Mansion novels. There is no fun at all.

Author, do you rely on your imagination for many plots? Only you know what you imagined, so you thought you wrote it yourself and then went on to the next paragraph? The turtle is standing not far from the maid. Is the maid's cousin coming to snatch the jade? When you turtle slapped your cousin's hand away, you didn't even take a step closer. How did you slap someone's hand away from a distance? Rely on qigong? Or do you rely on you to cultivate immortality? You may have made up your mind and quickly ran up to clap someone else's hand, but you didn't write it down? The details are too poor, and similar problems appear in almost every chapter. Are they frequently triggered? Extremely affecting viewing

The writing is okay, keep up the good work! Also: Who is the heroine? I wish I didn't have a harem!

Read more than 50 chapters! The conflict twists and turns in the plot are too blunt. For example, Baoyu's nickname for Lin Daiyu was already chosen before you came, and you wrote it yourself in the article. Daiyu said she liked it, and then you abruptly created a conflict between the protagonist and Baoyu. Although you were thinking about Daiyu's reputation, there was no objection from Daiyu to the nickname throughout the whole process, so you just stood up for it! Secondly, about the marriage between Yingchun and Sun Shaozu, you wrote in your article earlier that she looked tall, well-mannered, and held an official position, but the principal wife had been dead for a few years, and for Yingchun, a concubine, she was absolutely the principal wife. Deserving of it (no matter what the person is like in the original work, you know the reason, but Yingchun doesn't know). But the maid went to tell Yingchun, and as soon as she finished talking about Yingchun, she felt that the sky was falling. What you wrote is too imagined! The protagonist lives in Rongguo Mansion. Rongguo Mansion only shows kindness to the protagonist, and the protagonist's current identity can only be regarded as that of an outsider! In fact, the outline is pretty good, but the author's details are too immature and taken for granted! For me, I can only see here, withdraw! It may also be a matter of my personal preference, but readers who are new to the Red Mansion theme can still take a look!

The protagonist sometimes takes things for granted

The comment section is useless at all. Why is no one commenting on whether the writing is good or not? Can anyone who has come back from drug testing comment?

Why do you have to wash Wang Xifeng?

As long as the writing is reasonable, I will find it interesting. Cheers to the author.

After reading this chapter, I felt that Shi Xiangyun was so ignorant and a bit annoying. Lin Ruhai was seriously ill and Jia Yu's visit was equivalent to going to a funeral. She should just go to have fun!

Honeycomb briquettes cost 12 cents a piece and cost 48 cents a day, which is 1,500 mosquitoes a month. You think the common people are still rushing to buy it! ! ! !