Da Qin: I Have Repeatedly Offered Poisonous Strategies, but Zulong Advised Me to Calm Down
by Picking Up Shells On The Beach
About This Novel
Ye Chi traveled to Great Qin and became a doctor at Fengchang Temple. But Ye Chi, who had no background or support, was targeted at every turn, and was eventually accused of treason by Chun Yuyue and kicked out of Fengchang Temple! But he unexpectedly became the teacher of the young masters of the Qin Dynasty. In the court, he repeatedly used poisonous tactics, burned books to embarrass Confucian scholars, and defeated conservative clans. The color of Baiguan's talk changed. On this day, Qin Shihuang went to court. Qin Shihuang: The Huns are in danger in the north. Do you have any good strategies? Ye Chi slowly stood up. Qin Shihuang's expression changed drastically, and he waved his hands repeatedly: Sit down first, sit down first, the matter has not reached that point yet!
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Official(30)Scraped 6d ago
Author, can't you update more? Not to mention how much I ask you to update, you should at least update 10,000 words a day.
unrealistic
Did the Qin Dynasty want to break the imperial examination system for wealthy families? You don't even think about the people who could read in that era. Moreover, by about chapter 15, the protagonist is all talking about his personal opinions in a long speech. Others are like fools and listen to you and still look convinced. How is it possible for an adult who has already formed a concept? Different opinions will inevitably lead to debates. Qin Shihuang also looked excited. Author, have you read Shang Jun's book? Do you know the Six Arts of Controlling the People? The sixth generation of the Qin Dynasty all followed the policy of the merchant king. How can we just change it? Not to mention that the old nobles of the six countries can't stand it. The new nobles of the Qin State who have made great achievements in military affairs may also oppose it. Everyone in the world is an enemy. Is this a reform? This is self-destruction.
A fool's gambit. In ancient times, you could do whatever you wanted. Brainless article.
I think you think Qin Shihuang didn't die fast enough
It's really baffling and doesn't look good.
I just couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters.
After reading Chapter 22, I just listened to the protagonist's personal point of view, and I was blown away by the First Emperor. It is said that it was written about poisonous plots, but there is not a single plot. The Qin Dynasty built the Great Wall because the Qin Dynasty's national power did not allow it. I really thought that the Qin Dynasty did not want to fight and wanted to leave a historical wonder to future generations. Moreover, Fusu, a prince who was known for his kindness, would listen to a man who was famous for his poisonous tactics.
It doesn't specify whether the protagonist is a native or a time traveler. This is not stated clearly. No matter how good the subsequent writing is, it is all poisonous.
If your level is not good enough, don't write about history, let alone give advice. Read more history books to enrich yourself before writing.
High-minded but low-handed
I know you want to start with a higher intention and a higher starting point to attract readers. A vague opening is also good, but your writing skills are not good. The first three chapters are very poor in terms of reading sense. You want to write a long and magnificent history book, but all you have in your stomach is the three chapters in the history textbook. There are only a few strokes on the page, and the book is written with a high eye but a low hand. It makes people really uncomfortable to read the book. I have also started writing in this way, but the data is honestly very poor, so I finally removed it. Now, I still recommend you to start at a lower starting point and then add the settings later. It is much better than what you wrote like this. I will give you two stars to encourage you.
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Official(30)Scraped 6d ago
Author, can't you update more? Not to mention how much I ask you to update, you should at least update 10,000 words a day.
unrealistic
Did the Qin Dynasty want to break the imperial examination system for wealthy families? You don't even think about the people who could read in that era. Moreover, by about chapter 15, the protagonist is all talking about his personal opinions in a long speech. Others are like fools and listen to you and still look convinced. How is it possible for an adult who has already formed a concept? Different opinions will inevitably lead to debates. Qin Shihuang also looked excited. Author, have you read Shang Jun's book? Do you know the Six Arts of Controlling the People? The sixth generation of the Qin Dynasty all followed the policy of the merchant king. How can we just change it? Not to mention that the old nobles of the six countries can't stand it. The new nobles of the Qin State who have made great achievements in military affairs may also oppose it. Everyone in the world is an enemy. Is this a reform? This is self-destruction.
A fool's gambit. In ancient times, you could do whatever you wanted. Brainless article.
I think you think Qin Shihuang didn't die fast enough
It's really baffling and doesn't look good.
I just couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters.
After reading Chapter 22, I just listened to the protagonist's personal point of view, and I was blown away by the First Emperor. It is said that it was written about poisonous plots, but there is not a single plot. The Qin Dynasty built the Great Wall because the Qin Dynasty's national power did not allow it. I really thought that the Qin Dynasty did not want to fight and wanted to leave a historical wonder to future generations. Moreover, Fusu, a prince who was known for his kindness, would listen to a man who was famous for his poisonous tactics.
It doesn't specify whether the protagonist is a native or a time traveler. This is not stated clearly. No matter how good the subsequent writing is, it is all poisonous.
If your level is not good enough, don't write about history, let alone give advice. Read more history books to enrich yourself before writing.
High-minded but low-handed
I know you want to start with a higher intention and a higher starting point to attract readers. A vague opening is also good, but your writing skills are not good. The first three chapters are very poor in terms of reading sense. You want to write a long and magnificent history book, but all you have in your stomach is the three chapters in the history textbook. There are only a few strokes on the page, and the book is written with a high eye but a low hand. It makes people really uncomfortable to read the book. I have also started writing in this way, but the data is honestly very poor, so I finally removed it. Now, I still recommend you to start at a lower starting point and then add the settings later. It is much better than what you wrote like this. I will give you two stars to encourage you.
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