The Secret Head

I'm from the poisoned milk side, I hope you can hold on (eating melon is funny and funny)

The plot is too old-fashioned, and almost no one writes it now. You are in retro style. You had to make this show originally. The reason for the separation of the male and female protagonists is too far-fetched. I think you want to write a sadistic plot, but your plot is really stupid. If you want to write sadistic stories, read more materials. You are sadistic but not sadistic and disgusting, but your writing is okay.

I don't recommend it to old bookworms, but newcomers can check it out. The first few chapters are quite good, but the rest of the book falls apart. I can't stand it anymore. The main character, who has been around for more than 20 chapters, only has the ability to see other people's personalities. He has no fighting ability at all. I don't know how to protect myself, so I rely entirely on others to protect me. Or should we just rely on scaring the monsters from the abyss? ? No matter what, at least give the male protagonist some fighting power, okay? There are also two people monitoring the male protagonist, why only one person is monitoring the female protagonist? Don't say that you don't pay attention to it, thinking that the male protagonist has a secondary personality. In this case, no one knows who is it. Even if they are ordinary people, I have never seen them and let one person monitor them. It is just to set the rhythm for the following plot without considering logic. Also, when the heroine left, she didn't even look at the hero. If the male protagonist fell asleep that night, the female protagonist would have no choice but to collect the male protagonist's body when she came back. She knew that the male protagonist was asleep but didn't go to put him in a good place, so she just disappeared. Are you waiting for the heroine to come back and save the mummy? ? Or come back to save the rotten meat? ? He walked away without even looking at him. There is also a male protagonist who doesn't go looking for the female protagonist, saying that it's not necessary, and that even if he does, he can't get her back. But the heroine is doing this just for you. If you can't find her, at least tell the heroine that you are safe. And the protagonist's ability is still hidden, okay, this makes sense. After all, not everyone will reveal their trump cards. But you are a psychiatrist, and you are also the best psychiatrist. If nothing else, you should at least be able to read micro-expressions when talking to others, and understand what other people are feeling inside. What you are writing about is an ordinary person. You said you are a psychiatrist at the beginning, but it is not reflected in the rest. So why are you writing. You hide your ability and say it is a theory that your psychiatrist understands, such as micro-expressions and so on. It should be no problem to understand a person, right? Even if others think it's the ability of that necklace, you should still be able to talk about it after you've used it. I've only read twenty-five chapters, and that's all I can say. If it were really bad at the beginning, I wouldn't say anything and just leave. But the first few chapters are pretty good, but the rest are really not that good. It's a very good subject to write like this.

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The theme is quite attractive, but this book should be read by novices. If you are an old bookworm, I suggest you just read the beginning, because the turning point in the middle of the book is too abrupt, and it feels like you are reading another book with another world view. I feel that the foreshadowing in the front is unnecessary. It is better to write according to the world view directly behind, and the sudden turning point makes me lose the desire to read. I still give these three stars to the first thirty chapters.

Update soon, update soon! ! ! Where are people? Where did you go? !

The book is pretty good, but why isn't it updated?

I haven't read it yet. The reviews and ratings of this book friend don't match.

It's beautiful, I found it very attractive after reading the first few chapters!