Sign in in the Classroom at the Beginning, and the God of Learning Becomes Possessed

Did you write it so readers would scold you? You don't have the three views of a normal person, yet you're still writing here without even reading it? Not able to reflect? I also commented on the book, so I'll rate it here.

How to say it? Some people may have misunderstood my previous review as saying that I don't like novels with many harems (╥╥), but that's not actually the case. I have read all three of the author's novels. Generally speaking, the author has an idea in mind, but can't write it out. It's okay for newcomers, but old bookworms will find it naive after reading it. But, I think the author still has hope. So I hope my suggestions can help the author write his article. First of all, the author, you have too many characters. It's not that you can't write harem novels, but that your harem novels are far-fetched. What does that mean? For your character, the image characteristics are not well grasped. If you want to write about a beautiful woman, that beauty must have her own characteristics. Only in this way can you be liked by the protagonist. Over the years, there have been many articles about harems, but few have become popular. Why is this? It's because the role is not properly grasped. When we write an article, we must describe the image of the character well. The structure of the novel is the character, environment, and plot. If the character is not mastered well, the article will basically be useless. Let me give you an example. Take Lin Daiyu in Dream of Red Mansions. Why was Cao Xueqin able to write her so well in the first place? Because Lin Daiyu's image features are rich, the original text reads: "Two curved eyebrows that look like frowning but not frowning, and a pair of eyes that look like joy but not happiness. Her expression is full of sorrow, and her body is full of diseases. Tears are shed, and her breath is slight. She is as quiet as a beautiful flower shining on the water, and her actions are like a weak willow supporting the wind. The heart is more apertured than Gan, and the illness is like Xizi, which is three points better." In just a few sentences, Lin Daiyu's appearance, calmness and appearance can be described. Then we can imitate him when writing articles, for example, beauty, where is the beauty? We can add a characteristic to her, for example, this beauty has a mole under the corner of her eye, which is very impressive, or this beauty has charming eyes but an arrogant temperament, which makes the protagonist feel ripples. The character of this article must be well portrayed so that readers will think, oh, it turns out that the protagonist likes her because of this, not just because she is a beauty and I like her. This seems more far-fetched. Of course some people like harem stories, but you should always give them a reason to like them! There are many articles that attract people because of their characters. If the author doesn't write the plot well, I suggest you change it. In addition, the author is reminded that characters and plot are the most important, and the environment is just a green leaf to set off the characters and plot. Analyze the author's thinking. Your original intention is very good, but you have not grasped the idea of ​​​​the whole book. Writing an article is not about writing just one thing as you think of it. In the end, you must first think about its general idea and direction. Otherwise, if you want to change your idea later, it will be difficult for you to change it. I have read all three of your books. The shortcoming of this book is that it is not very enjoyable. Why is it so exciting? There are too many pitfalls, and the previous article and the following article don't match up. To put it nicely, you've made a detour in your thinking. To say it's not nice, I have to say what you wrote😳. Earlier, I said that the original owner was suave and charming. You can't learn from him. Later, you opened a harem with me. Are you so obviously trying to fool me? Don't make that hole too big, otherwise you won't be able to turn the corner! In the end, you will just fill in one hole after another. Aren't you tired? What I'm looking at is the quality of the book. The theme of your other fantasy book is very novel. The protagonist has an ambition, but if you don't grasp his train of thought well, it seems very shocking, right? I think so! If at the beginning, we list the outline and the content to be written at each stage, for example, after you have prepared the writing outline and sent it to others, you will start writing the article. I know what I want to write in the front and what I want to write in the back. Authors, when we write articles, we pick up a pen and start fighting. Every time you write an article, you are fighting with others. New book list, potential list, don't you want it? Don't you want to be in the top ten? Don't you want someone to give you a monthly pass? Don't you want to make money? 😱The author please write well. Now that you have started writing, carefully look for some explanations online and read them. Or after you finish writing, you can read it to your friends and then send it to others for suggestions. You can also read more books and keep up with everyone. Not only read novels, but also read classics. How far do you need to practice to learn how to modify novels? If you want to practice a book, you can tell its quality at a glance. What are the problems with it? What advice can you give him? Maybe reading novels is a pastime in the eyes of most people, but isn't it a learning experience? I know what's wrong with your novel, author. I can point it out to you so that you can change it so that you can write better next time. Writing novels does not depend on talent. It relies on reading books, listening to lectures, and not breaking taboos. There are eight taboos in total. You have only broken six. I will list them for you. 1. The beginning of the text is boring and unattractive. 2. The characters are unclear and have no characteristics. 3. The character name is too complicated 4. Waste pen and ink on unimportant things 5. Bland and not vivid, description of details is very important 6. Brainless love, I love you for no reason 7. The rendering power of the article will change due to the text. 8. The whole novel has no theme Let me say one last thing, please be sure to read it, and be sure to revise it. I hope this is the last review of your book.

I can't stand it anymore, sorry I can't watch it anymore! Farewell

Like this book, So I recommend it.

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This book is for novices. Old bookworms will not be able to read it at all.

I could have written this book with a young loser counterattacking and slapping the villain in the face, but I didn't because I wanted to write something different, one that was not bound by routines. Some people say that I don't know how to write a book, and I am a newcomer. I don't deny it. It is indeed my first time to write a sign-in article. Next, I will talk about the aspects of this book that dissatisfy some readers. First of all, in everyone's perception, money is king. No matter what the other person is, everyone should be respected by others. But I don't want this. This world also needs justice, and I have the courage to fight against people who are rich but have no intentions. Therefore, I set up the image of the male protagonist as a rich second generation and a romantic young man (I specifically note that I am not hating the rich, you will know after reading that the rich will have great abilities), and the beginning of this image is a conflict with a school beauty in the class. The school beauty borrows money from the original person, and the original person is evil. He does not want to get the school beauty immediately, but wants the school beauty to fall in love with her, and then engage in physical and spiritual love. God tortured her, and the school beauty received help from the original person, but she always felt that she was just borrowing it, not taking it. For the protagonist, it seemed that she did not get any substantial reward, but from the perspective of the school beauty, she suffered for several months, was bullied by the original person, and was frightened day and night. Later, when the agreed deadline was up, she quickly broke up. It was not that she was ungrateful, but that she was afraid of the original person. Fortunately, the protagonist traveled through time and worked hard to change his image in the minds of his classmates. Not everyone with money and status can cover the sky with just one hand. In the book, except for the head teacher, other teachers are not optimistic about the protagonist, but they will not criticize him too harshly. I know what everyone wants. The protagonist starts by shocking others. It's really cool. But I wanted to write a book that was not realistic, but realistic, and full of contradictions. Recently, my book has been put on the shelves, and a lot of people have criticized me. It doesn't matter. Thank you for clicking in and reading it. I say sorry to my angry brother. I really didn't really want to write the plot in such a super pretentious way.

I was told to quit at the beginning, and the sound of turning books was so loud that the whole classroom could hear it. I was curious about what book made such a loud sound when turned.

Today's novels are becoming increasingly inferior

First of all, as a female bookworm, I started to read online in 2017. I have seen a lot of novels. This kind of cool novels are quite attractive, but in fact, there are two ways of expression in a book, which are both good and bad. Those with more harems tend to be more male-oriented, and we women are more disgusted with this phenomenon. In general cool novels, his plot can be very wide, but there are usually not many harems, because once there are more harems, there are also more characters, which is more difficult to grasp, so this is why there are relatively few people writing about harems. Secondly, I cannot deny that the rating of this book is indeed high, but in fact, if you look carefully, there are still some flaws. For example, the protagonist Chu He traveled through time to another Chu He, the only son of Chu Hanfeng, the Chu family in Jianglin City. His original ambition should have been to help Yuan Sheng get rid of his romantic nature, but it seems that he later became a romantic figure himself. Secondly, the purpose of this article is not very clear. We can see that his introduction is indeed closely related to the name of the book, but what about its content? As it is written, it enters into a romance. When writing the introduction, you can give him a foreshadowing. At least let people know that it is not just about the academic system, but also writes about the original owner who did not listen to the class and was punished by the teacher to stand, and then the protagonist slapped him in the face. But I think we can actually write about the teacher Qiu Fu. Then slap him in the face. Otherwise, the teacher actually did nothing wrong. This will lead to a misleading thinking of the students. In fact, this is a blind spot. Then I think this book should add some environmental descriptions, which can improve the quality of the article. When writing a novel, the three elements of environment, characters and plot should be grasped accurately. But in fact, there are many characters and plots in it, and the environment is just weakened. So I think this point should be changed. The environment also plays a big role. It plays a major role in setting off the characters, mood, image, psychology and other aspects. I can't say this novel is not good. I am not in the mood to read it because of the large harem. Apart from the large harem, I think this novel is still very good.