The Evil King's Favorite Snake and Scorpion Concubine

Yesterday, my husband suddenly... While I was reading seriously, he suddenly pounced from behind me, and then held me down. I thought it was something, but my husband started to massage me, making me feel better. My husband will also compliment me on how sexy my figure has become and how supple I am. Being able to do this, I actually have a good way to take care of myself, and now I can improve my belly.

OK, five points! The writing is smooth, and the plot is clearly written with care. Although there are still many areas for improvement, I support the author in continuing to work hard! Although the beginning of the article is obviously a bit long-winded, and many details are not in the state, the more you write, the more you get into the state! Not cruel, I feel relaxed and happy after watching it! The love between Yu'er and Ling Tian is beautiful and touching! Although when I first watched it, I really wanted Ning Rui to be the male protagonist, because no matter which life, the one who is willing to accompany you to death is not true love! So I was so confused when I saw Yu'er and Liluo reunited... Ahhhh! It's just that there can only be one male protagonist in the end! Liluo's love and Nangong Jin's love are also pure and beautiful. I believe they can also get their own happiness! Although He Lianxuan's story had a big twist at the end, and the villain became Infernal Affairs, I still feel that this reason is a bit far-fetched. Didn't all his forbearance and planning not avoid wars or reduce killings? Three years of war and smoke have brought countless sufferings to the people, so after reading it, I did not feel how great the author wrote about him. Although he died to save the heroine in the end, it can only be lamented! The heroine's parents didn't appear later, but I actually think there should still be a lot of stories about this pair.

Reading this book is faster! The plot is not bad, but the relationship between the characters is always caused by love and hatred! Alas, why can't it be good? I don't like many men chasing after one woman, and I don't like many women staring at one man endlessly! I have always felt that there is nothing to feel sorry for this male partner or that male partner! No matter how much you give, it will never compare to the reality that you are not there in that person's heart. In this case, why bother to be so stubborn? He can't let go that he doesn't have a spouse in the end. The problem lies with him, so I don't like this kind of character very much! The heroine has to feel indebted and the hero has a thorn in his heart. Is this perfect? In order to give him an explanation, I had to write something that would make the children fall in love with him. To be honest, if I were my biological mother and father, I would feel very unhappy! No one is that generous, after all, you can't force things about feelings! The above is purely a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, after all, everyone has their own opinion! I'm a little too rational!

I like the supporting characters very much, but I don't like the male lead. The male lead is a bit inhumane and looks down on others. It seems that the supporting actors are all good.

The story is okay, but the author talks too much. It would be better to simplify it and make the plot more compact.

The whole book opens in journal mode, which is bland and very verbose. One sentence is repeated three times, and the numbers are repeated! ! ! !

Don't just praise her beauty and handsomeness as soon as the male protagonist comes out. This is a lot of nonsense.

Good............

Hua Jingyu wanted to get up anxiously, but her belly was a bit big. She accidentally fell down on the bed as soon as she sat down, and couldn't get up for a long time. Nangong Lingtian couldn't help but laugh when he saw her cute appearance, and stretched out his hand to help her sit up. "Yu'er, don't be anxious. The guy is staying there anyway and can't run away." "Laughing, still laughing." Hua Jingyu was a little embarrassed. He glared at Nangong Lingtian and looked at his belly. It was really big. For the first time, he felt that pregnancy was actually a tiring job. [Emot=default,14/]

I watched Hua Jingyu (Mumu) and Nangong Lingtian for a long time and forgot the plot. However, the heroine and the male supporting character still have a friendship that goes beyond the relationship between men and women. Some things are worlds apart in just one thought! Good and evil are just a matter of thought!