The Rebirth of the Legitimate Daughter as a Prosperous Princess
About This Novel
She became the target of public criticism. When she was immersed in the cold and biting lake water, she suddenly realized that all this was just someone else's plan! But, it's too late! ... If there is an afterlife, if there is an afterlife... ... Rebirth, back to the time when her parents were still alive. At this time, she was not an orphan. Her parents were still there, and their love was still the same, and she was still the beloved legitimate daughter of the Shen family! In this life, she will definitely protect the people she loves and never repeat the mistakes of her previous life! And those who have hurt her, she will make them pay the price!
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Official(308)Scraped 1mo ago
After reading many books, I found that the author was very unfamiliar with interpersonal relationships. Prince Duan's father was the emperor's uncle, and his mother was the emperor's aunt. Wasn't that the marriage of cousins? ?
In what order did the author write it? It's a mess, and the age and month don't match up at all.
First of all, the issue of age is really big. I don't know how old anyone is! More importantly, how many years has her mother been pregnant? Nezha? Also, I would like to sincerely advise the author. A good word is good for the first time, but it is also good for the second time. If used too much, it will become vulgar. It is very annoying to read one more word. Is it possible that your vocabulary is so small that you just go back and forth with that one word? Also, be careful with some words. They are not suitable for use in certain situations. At least understand the meaning of the word before writing! Also, there are many problems with the arrangement and combination of sentences. Please pay attention to it. There are some jokes that the author has not used yet. What are they for? .
The master is still afraid of the slave? Articles like this are said to be good-looking
Thoughts after reading
Where is the Princess of Shengshi? The heroine obviously married a prince who had a rough life and became a miserable prince and concubine. In the end, the prince had a righteous intention and killed his relatives before becoming a prince. The heroine didn't see how prosperous and beautiful the heroine was! Also, I didn't notice the so-called "shocking the world". I would like to ask what is the ultimate purpose of the heroine studying medicine and opening a charity hall? But a few people knew that the heroine was the boss behind the Charity Hall, and they originally thought that the heroine would become an imperial merchant and control the economic lifeline of the Chu Kingdom! How shocking is this! ? House fights, palace fights, and political fights are all described in insufficient detail, and the heroine Bai is reborn. The character's heart, feelings, and thoughts are not grasped. The childhood part is too long, the second-bedroom part is too delayed, but the emotional activities of the male and female protagonists are too understated and not exciting and in-depth enough, so it is not fast enough. Finally, I would like to ask what kind of characters the author wants to portray the male and female protagonists, and where is the soul of the entire work?
I was too young when I was reborn, and I kept getting my age wrong.
Write something about Prince Rui, what's the point of just writing about concubine? I feel annoyed when I read it. Why can't I find a book I like to read?
The writing style is a bit childish, too pale, and lacks depth.
As you can see, you are truly a god.
This is an article that makes people run away from the author at first glance. This kind of article is still found very often. It scares people to death.
. . .
After watching the part about the female pigs in Jiangnan, to be honest, I really disliked the following points: 1. As long as they are female pig maids, their lives are better than those of the daughters of small households. After rebirth, they actually feel that they must be happy (as a native of ancient times, he would be responsible for the maids just because they perform their duties. This is a very ridiculous point of view, which has completely brought in modern people's thinking). 2. The best friends of female pigs will definitely be happy. Once problems arise, female pigs will try their best to ensure the happiness of their best friends. From their natal family to getting married to having children, their own mothers will not interfere so much. They will be surrounded by female pigs for the rest of their lives (please, those are ancient people who were born and raised in ancient times. This is too perfectionistic and disgusting) 3 When the male pig fell in love with the female pig, the female pig was still a child of less than ten years old. This kind of person who will fall in love with something once they meet is disgusting (pedophilia, the male pig is already seventeen years old and can be a father, and he doesn't find the female pig attractive at all) 4 After the male pig starts to pay attention to the female pig, the female pig is a useless pronoun, and all important things depend on the male pig. . . Too lazy to give any more examples
The plot of the story is quite good, but unfortunately the author's writing style is really not that good, the description is not accurate and expressive, and the author has a fatal flaw. The author always likes to add the word "haha" when others speak. For example: "Haha, aren't these Mrs. Shen and Miss Shen? Nice to meet you!" Someone saw Shen Jingshu and Mrs. Shen with sharp eyes and came over to say hello enthusiastically. Now their attitude is better than before. ?"Haha, hello, Mrs. Zhang." This kind of thing always happens everywhere. It will leave readers with a very uncomfortable feeling. I saw Chapter 333 and saw countless hehes from the author, and finally couldn't help but complain about it. The author might as well put himself in someone else's shoes and think about it. Do you always laugh when you talk to others? I hope the author can accept my opinions😊
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Official(308)Scraped 1mo ago
After reading many books, I found that the author was very unfamiliar with interpersonal relationships. Prince Duan's father was the emperor's uncle, and his mother was the emperor's aunt. Wasn't that the marriage of cousins? ?
In what order did the author write it? It's a mess, and the age and month don't match up at all.
First of all, the issue of age is really big. I don't know how old anyone is! More importantly, how many years has her mother been pregnant? Nezha? Also, I would like to sincerely advise the author. A good word is good for the first time, but it is also good for the second time. If used too much, it will become vulgar. It is very annoying to read one more word. Is it possible that your vocabulary is so small that you just go back and forth with that one word? Also, be careful with some words. They are not suitable for use in certain situations. At least understand the meaning of the word before writing! Also, there are many problems with the arrangement and combination of sentences. Please pay attention to it. There are some jokes that the author has not used yet. What are they for? .
The master is still afraid of the slave? Articles like this are said to be good-looking
Thoughts after reading
Where is the Princess of Shengshi? The heroine obviously married a prince who had a rough life and became a miserable prince and concubine. In the end, the prince had a righteous intention and killed his relatives before becoming a prince. The heroine didn't see how prosperous and beautiful the heroine was! Also, I didn't notice the so-called "shocking the world". I would like to ask what is the ultimate purpose of the heroine studying medicine and opening a charity hall? But a few people knew that the heroine was the boss behind the Charity Hall, and they originally thought that the heroine would become an imperial merchant and control the economic lifeline of the Chu Kingdom! How shocking is this! ? House fights, palace fights, and political fights are all described in insufficient detail, and the heroine Bai is reborn. The character's heart, feelings, and thoughts are not grasped. The childhood part is too long, the second-bedroom part is too delayed, but the emotional activities of the male and female protagonists are too understated and not exciting and in-depth enough, so it is not fast enough. Finally, I would like to ask what kind of characters the author wants to portray the male and female protagonists, and where is the soul of the entire work?
I was too young when I was reborn, and I kept getting my age wrong.
Write something about Prince Rui, what's the point of just writing about concubine? I feel annoyed when I read it. Why can't I find a book I like to read?
The writing style is a bit childish, too pale, and lacks depth.
As you can see, you are truly a god.
This is an article that makes people run away from the author at first glance. This kind of article is still found very often. It scares people to death.
. . .
After watching the part about the female pigs in Jiangnan, to be honest, I really disliked the following points: 1. As long as they are female pig maids, their lives are better than those of the daughters of small households. After rebirth, they actually feel that they must be happy (as a native of ancient times, he would be responsible for the maids just because they perform their duties. This is a very ridiculous point of view, which has completely brought in modern people's thinking). 2. The best friends of female pigs will definitely be happy. Once problems arise, female pigs will try their best to ensure the happiness of their best friends. From their natal family to getting married to having children, their own mothers will not interfere so much. They will be surrounded by female pigs for the rest of their lives (please, those are ancient people who were born and raised in ancient times. This is too perfectionistic and disgusting) 3 When the male pig fell in love with the female pig, the female pig was still a child of less than ten years old. This kind of person who will fall in love with something once they meet is disgusting (pedophilia, the male pig is already seventeen years old and can be a father, and he doesn't find the female pig attractive at all) 4 After the male pig starts to pay attention to the female pig, the female pig is a useless pronoun, and all important things depend on the male pig. . . Too lazy to give any more examples
The plot of the story is quite good, but unfortunately the author's writing style is really not that good, the description is not accurate and expressive, and the author has a fatal flaw. The author always likes to add the word "haha" when others speak. For example: "Haha, aren't these Mrs. Shen and Miss Shen? Nice to meet you!" Someone saw Shen Jingshu and Mrs. Shen with sharp eyes and came over to say hello enthusiastically. Now their attitude is better than before. ?"Haha, hello, Mrs. Zhang." This kind of thing always happens everywhere. It will leave readers with a very uncomfortable feeling. I saw Chapter 333 and saw countless hehes from the author, and finally couldn't help but complain about it. The author might as well put himself in someone else's shoes and think about it. Do you always laugh when you talk to others? I hope the author can accept my opinions😊
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