The Young Master of the Ancient Clan of Dou Po

The Young Master of the Ancient Clan of Dou Po

by Funny Child

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149Kwords74chapters
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Ch. 74大结局
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About This Novel

Gu Tong just wanted to take care of Xun'er as a younger sister, but Xun'er kept flirting with her. "Hey, I just want to have a sister, you don't want to be like this!" Gu Tong was helpless. Only Xiao Yan, dressed in black robe, with the cold light of the Xuan Zhongchi on his back, stood alone in a dark corner gritting his teeth.

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Xunqi66mo ago

Author, I found that there are many loopholes now

When he traveled back in time, he was the leader of the gods, extremely powerful, the strongest person in the Demon-Free Continent, and the existence on the Fighting Qi Continent. After traveling through time, he carries the power of the gods, knows the plot, knows that Yao Lao awakens in advance, and knows to break off the engagement. Next to him is the top powerhouse in the Dou Qi Continent, the Nine-Star Fighting Saint. He has traveled through time and brought with him the power of the gods, the Sharingan, the supreme existence on the Dou Qi Continent. This is all timid. Since you have offended Xiao Yan, then kill him directly. Don't say that he hid too deeply. You even know the plot. You don't know anything. Don't say that you can't kill him. Even if you can't kill him, it's still okay to snatch Yao Lao and kill him. So why do you have to wait for him to grow up and become a serious problem before taking action? Then there is no point in traveling to the past? To be the leader of the gods, the coercion should be very strong, the aura on the body should not be weak, and the IQ should not be low. Do you know how strong you are as a child of luck? Not to mention knowing the plot, not to mention you are the strongest person in the Demonless Continent. There should be many secret techniques and techniques for beings on the Fighting Qi Continent. Why do you have to practice fighting skills? Isn't it good to practice the skills of the Demon-Free Continent that are stronger than those of the Dou Qi Continent? This is the difference between a low-level plane and a high-level plane High-level planes are much stronger than low-level planes, and you also said that if you compare Douqi Continent and Wumo Continent, they are low-level planes and high-level planes. What makes me even more puzzled is that you are still a one-star fighter after more than 10 years, and your talent is eaten by dogs. Then what kind of power do you still have? With such a weak talent, how can you become a higher level than the Dou Qi Continent and the strongest person in the Demon-Free Continent? You still have some vision, and your brain should be running very fast. And that great elder, when he stares at you with scorching eyes, why do you retreat? Don't you understand what it means? Is this still the head of the gods? It gives me the feeling that he is not the leader of the gods at all. He has nothing but a higher IQ. There is a Dou Sage beside him, the top nine-star Dou Sage in the Dou Qi Continent. After crossing over, he even carries the power of the gods. It's just a matter of fear and fear. Just do it and it's over. If you can't kill Xiao Yan, then it's useless. Yao Lao has already snatched it for him. Don't you know that in the face of absolute strength, everything is futile? This position of the head of the gods is really rubbish. There is even a Nine-Star Fighting Saint who doesn't know how to use it. If there are high-level things, don't use them. You have to use low-level ones. Don't you know that the role of a high-level thing in a low-level plane can be called world-destroying? Having said that, as for the subsequent development, I hope you can change it and exert the power of the head of the high-level gods. You are not required to use all the momentum, even a little bit. After all, you have stood at the peak for too long, and the momentum on your body, in every gesture, is invincible, no matter how deep it is hidden, it cannot be changed. This is the momentum exerted by the existence at the pinnacle of the high-level plane in the low-level plane.

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Reader 131200927158993305666mo ago

I accidentally discovered a huge loophole

The diligent author changed the original opening, so the protagonist is no longer a time traveler who is familiar with the plot. Then how did he learn about the plot of Dou Po?

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ۋۋۋۋ66mo ago

The pace is going to speed up, climax is going to happen

After Chapter 25, the plot after the family test will gradually speed up the pace, and the first interesting climax will be revealed, and the second part of the plot will be entered before it is released on the shelves. A magical climax that you will never expect!

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ۋۋۋۋ66mo ago

Phew, the antidote has been prepared

Some poisonous points have been modified. Comments and corrections are welcome! Writing good works is the original intention! Thank you all

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Test Each Book to See If it is Poisonous66mo ago

Well enough

This book is specifically designed to slap the protagonist in the face Steal your wife, seize opportunity

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ۋۋۋۋ66mo ago

Recent modifications

Many readers are raising some loopholes and flaws, which will be corrected this week. 1: The reason why the protagonist is a one-star fighter at the beginning. After all, I have eaten the meat of a fighting saint-level monster for ten years. I know that this flaw will be solved. 2: Xiao Yan pretended to be cool in front of the protagonist and lacked feedback. This is a fatal mistake and will be emphatically corrected. 3: The characters of Xun'er and the protagonist are reflected in the previous, but not obvious, but they will be very clear in the second volume, and of course they will not be brainless. I also try my best to repair the front and try my best to be better. 4: Why not kill Xiao Yan directly? Xiao Yan is the son of luck. Relying on Yao Lao, these places will be dealt with in a smooth manner. That's all for now, I'll revise it this week. If there are still flaws, just point them out below! Writing a book means working hard to write it well! No replenishment, no hydrology! It's a small fan fiction, I'm working on accumulating writing power for the next fantasy book. It's normal to revise and revise it, just fix it.

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ۋۋۋۋ66mo ago

Ask for feedback

The road to writing is long, and I'm searching from top to bottom. Whether your writing is good or not, your comments are the most intuitive. Every day I will read what I have written to correct, study, and compare. But it's not clear whether it satisfies everyone's tastes, and we need feedback to make corrections. Not for anything else, just to write well! Thank you!

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ۋۋۋۋ66mo ago

Just two updates today. I'll write again when I wake up in the middle of the night.

Halfway through writing, I feel sleepy and out of shape. Xiudou has been working hard to pursue it, hoping to bring you interesting plots and a good reading experience. There will be two updates today, so I won't write anymore. I'll finish it when I wake up in the middle of the night.

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Reader 168113344283917926466mo ago

I always feel that this protagonist is both competent and upright

Stepping on Xiao Yan while transforming Xiao Yan is so hypocritical.

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Wu Id66mo ago

Hahaha

There is a Fighting Saint by your side, why do you think so much?

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