A Brilliant Life Begins in Kindergarten

I have read nine chapters so far. Let me tell you my feelings first! The author wants to lay out a world view, but although the idea is good, the technical content is not enough, giving people the feeling of trying too hard! From the beginning of the chapter, we begin to establish the character and lay out the world view. But frequent conversations feel very boring. Moreover, the author wrote it very anxiously, bringing all the characters and worldview together. It's very uncomfortable to watch! In fact, there is no need to express it so quickly. It should be guided slowly, so that it will not give people a sense of shock. You established five characters in just nine chapters and added a lot of world views, which makes it feel very crowded.

After reading so many chapters, a "half-heroine" came out.

I was immediately persuaded to quit after seeing one, it was exaggerated, and a bit clumsy. I like the calm, silent protagonist. This kind of protagonist looks just like those pretentious Muggles.

Oh my god, I'm afraid you are not a monster. The writing is too exaggerated and a bit flashy. It feels like the whole story has only a halo and no plot.

The protagonist's journey to cheating begins at an early age! ! !

I like this type. I hope the author writes an invincible novel. From the beginning, he is invincible and crushes him all the way. He travels to other worlds and becomes a salted fish.

Urgent to update, remind to update, say important things three times

I thought it was pretty good when I first watched it, but later on it wasn't challenging at all (it was uncomfortable) and the male protagonist's costume was so realistic that I couldn't stand it (I'll abandon the article)

I think it's okay, but sometimes the names are spelled wrong. You can only know whether a book is good or not after reading it yourself.

Dear author, please create a book club, and then I will go in and urge you to update every day (ಡωಡ)