There is a Bar in Houhai

In reality, I have low self-esteem and am cowardly. I dare not conflict with anyone or insult others for fear of being beaten. But on the Internet... I am! High-spirited! Look down on the world! Insulting netizens, I am the only one who dominates! If God had not given birth to me as a keyboard warrior, my spouting would be as long as the night. Come on! The peak of immortality, proud of the world! As long as I have the keyboard, there will be heaven! The key to the river comes from the sky! One click to control the world! Break the world of mortals! Kill all the immortals! Cut off nine heavens with one click! What if there are no true immortals in the world? I would like to hold the key and become an immortal!

As a fat man who has been in the book world for more than ten years, I really couldn't find any books to read around the National Day, so I suddenly thought of writing a book myself for fun. At that time, I wrote an outline and introduction with my Form 2 students. The introduction read like this: ""Harem? Impossible, the author is a firm supporter of single female protagonists. Urgent update? Even more impossible, as a non-professional writer, his main job is to earn money and support his family. Writing? Just passing the time when I'm bored. Eunuch? Impossible, at most it won't be updated for half a month. Tell me? It's up to you, I haven't seen it anyway. " Haha, are you following the second grade? Later I realized that my thinking was too simple. As long as you log in, Qidian's "Writer Assistant" will prompt: how many recommendations, how many comments, blah blah blah. As a fat man with mild obsessive-compulsive disorder, I unconsciously remove red dots every day. I have read all the messages from book friends, including encouragement, ridicule, suggestions, and abuse... As a fat boy in the second grade of middle school, I will be happy when I receive encouragement, and I will modify it when I see suggestions. But your abuse is a bit too much. This is a Chinese entertainment novel, and it will definitely allude to some real characters. Maybe there is a certain book lover here. I have tried my best to write the characters alluded to in the book from the positive side. If you still don't like it, you can give up the book. Anyway, the current score of this book is only average. You delete it from your bookshelf and ignore it. Okay, that's enough complaining, forgive me for pinning it to the top. (This is the author's right.)

I especially like this kind of plain, literary and artistic articles, which give people a comfortable feeling and make people happy. They also bring me into certain situations and make them involuntarily happy.

When I opened the comments, all I saw were people complaining about the heroine's career. Fatty and I are considered a straight man, so I basically don't arrange intimate scenes for her. Even the kissing scene is a borrowed one, but I didn't expect that it wouldn't work. O(╥╥)o Originally, I wanted to be tough and continue to write according to the outline, starting from "The Left Ear", "July and Ansheng", and then through the relationship between the male protagonists to Hollywood "Fast and Furious" and then "Mulan". Now that I think about it, I might as well forget it. The fat man decided to revise the outline. "Left Ear" has already been written, so let's finish it, and then also finish a few guest roles. The one who shines in "Left Ear" is Li Ba. Li Er doesn't have much to shine, so I am planning to arrange a movie with a big heroine for the heroine. This drama shows off the acting skills without any intimacy scenes! ! Again, no make out scenes! ! Interested readers can leave a message to guess. After these two dramas are over, the heroine's future development will be variety shows, singers, and charity ambassadors. If you still have relevant suggestions, I hope you guys will leave a message. I won't say any more and will revise the outline. One last thing, fellow veterans, you win this round! ! I will try my best to torture you next time. (*^▽^*)

I wrote this post using QQ Reader. I started my first batch of high Vs. It can be said that I have read more books than I eat salt. I have seen too many various routines and various tricks. To be honest, there are almost no routines in this book, which is rare. First of all, the conflicts set in the background of the protagonist of this book are very interesting. His parents are divorced, his father is a scumbag, his mother is depressed, and the protagonist who lives two lives lacks family care. It is very interesting. This setting idea is very realistic. 2. The various characters who appear are very real, and there is no situation where the two businessmen are not online. If the author does not have a life, then it is carefully crafted, at least with care. 3. The setting of the protagonist's wealth value can tell that this is a light novel, and the entertainment industry route can tell that this is an urban entertainment light novel, but the protagonist has a two-life attitude and wants to enjoy life, which means that the conflict is not obvious and the cool points are unclear, which can easily lose viewers. 4. There is a lack of emotional lines. It is not impossible for the mother who has been depressed for many years to suddenly improve, but if some conflict points are added, it may not be so blunt, and it can increase the characterization of the protagonist's mother and make the character more three-dimensional. The emotional line with the heroine is even more of a failure. Why? Too impatient, with almost no points of conflict, that is, the points that should be exciting are not exciting, suppressed, and promoted. The whole book is just one word, flat. 5. Having said so much, I have come up with a few opinions. The author has a life, the writing is average, the outline has been carefully revised, the logic is smooth, the characters are well described, the main line is clear, the emotional line is bullshit (it is written, but it is not in place), the whole is too bland, slow-burning, various characters appear online, there are no routines, it is still worth watching.

I don't like Stallion, System Flow, and Invincible Literature. Can you recommend some novels to read? Book shortage, any novel will do😘

Many netizens complained about some chapters, especially the scene where the two met. To be honest, Fatty is my first time writing a novel, and some of the passages were forced to be written. After seeing everyone's complaints, I went back and read it again, and planned to take the time to modify the content. All modified chapters will not affect the subsequent plot. If you are interested, you can go back and read it.

I haven't finished reading yet. Did the protagonist and Mo Mo break up in the end? The protagonist longs for an ordinary life, while Mo Mo is the opposite. I don't know if it's right or not. Don't criticize me.

Why can't families be perfect? As a child who grew up in a divorced family, I very much hope for a happy family. I don't want to get angry for no reason when I see the word divorce. If I can't give my children a perfect family, I don't want to have children. If I have children, I won't raise them. This makes me feel a little bit depressed. I really don't want to give anything.

In fact, the book is good, but the protagonist is looking for a heroine who is from the entertainment industry. It is too difficult to get ahead in the entertainment industry, and it is difficult for acting people to get ahead, and it feels weird to have a female protagonist filmed, especially when the protagonist is so rich and has a background!