Fall in Love and Become Popular

It's pretty cool, but the system was a bit uncomfortable in the early stages. Does anyone know about this kind of book that participates in love variety shows? Please recommend it, thank you

The author is completely new. I have never used QQ to read before, and I don't even know what it means to change the first website. It is my first time to write a book, and it is by chance that I have reached this point. Writing a book has gone through three stages so far. 1. At the beginning, I was arrogant about "I can do it myself". I felt that other people's writing was not good. I seemed to be popular as soon as I wrote. I felt that I was very powerful and writing was very easy. 2. After more readers, some people began to comment on what was wrong. At the beginning, it was "I don't want to be pointed out. It's just for fun anyway." Because some readers are willing to give rewards and support, I can't write so casually, so I re-read it today. Combined with the recent study of Chen Guying's "Laozi's Modern Commentary and Modern Translation", I can study with a calm mind, and I have indeed discovered my own problems. I will pay attention to these problems when I continue to write and open books in the future - and because I read very quickly this time, I feel that my writing is much worse. 1. Use more scenes, write stories, write character interactions, and write conflict resolutions. Instead of too many monologues, although it is interesting to read in detail, regular readers will read it very quickly, which will reduce the impact and interest a lot. But the fundamental problem with psychological description is that there is no complete outline and there is no certainty about the subsequent conflict. 2. Regarding the rhythm issue, many people mentioned the problem of system persuasion. I found that the bigger problem is that the system pressed three times in succession at the beginning of the chapter, but did not release it once. According to the current hobbies of readers, they will not be patient, so in the future, they should pay attention to each piece and relax, and cannot press or release continuously. 3. Regarding the language issue, I personally hope to use more defamiliarization techniques to create unique descriptions, but most readers will only scan it and will not slow down to read carefully. Moreover, I feel that the reading experience of QQ Reading is not as good as the starting point. When reading, people can't help but speed up, so I still use conventional language. ----The above is based on my experience based on everyone's opinions, and will be gradually revised and improved in the future. My final feeling after reading it is that it is a light comedy with few conflicts. The key is to read slowly and appreciate the fun of the text. ----Let me talk about some things that I personally think are pretty good: 1. Character image: Because I have written a biography for each character, I personally still feel that the characters are not thin and are complex. 2. Writing style: Interesting and non-violent. This is what I have always wanted to achieve. I don't like the kind of stupid white-faced writing. If it is arranged in an ancient setting in the future, it will be more interesting to write with contrast. 3. Story theme: Fortunately, I didn't fall into the same old routine. I used a low-key system before to avoid routines. Now that it's in the form of a variety show, I think it's still creative – although it's really tiring to write like this, it's completely original. ----It took a little time to code, but I think it is still worth it, and it will be beneficial to the long-term development in the future. Thank you all for your comments, whether good or bad, as long as they are informative and informative, I will keep them. However, those kind of "bad reviews" with no information at all are simply annoying, and all kinds of violent comments will be deleted to avoid damaging the harmony of our village.

When I first read it, I felt nauseous and wanted to vomit. I even had the urge to ask the author if he would write a book. But by chance I saw the author's post saying it would start from chapter 30, so I skipped to chapter 30. Unfortunately, I felt just as nauseous, or even worse. But I couldn't stop myself, so I read it when I had free time. When I read Chapter 30 seriously from the first chapter, I suddenly realized: this book is just a sweet love story without any previous foreshadowing. The reason why I like this book the most is also very simple. The characters of the supporting characters in this book are very full because the protagonist's abilities are not comprehensive. Their respective characters are not simply excellent or extremely bad, but are very complex and full, and they are not locked. Even if he dies, he will change, and there is also a motive for personality change... I wrote a few points in a hurry, and there is only one sentence I want to say. I advise all the book friends who are reading the first few chapters not to be bothered, and read on carefully. I have also written two or three chapters of the book, so I can better understand the author. It's not easy----the dividing line----I thought about it again and looked at it. I feel that the system described by the author has a special feeling. It is infinitely close to reality. The system will only allow you to live. If you copy the book, your life will be eaten away. (If the author gives money, then there is no need to duck, because I read the book for free, don't hit me, I will still give you the tickets every day, and it is the same at the starting point, there are two tickets every day)

Low-key originally refers to a low-pitched tone, which is a metaphor for a moderate or relatively depressed tone. Later it was described as gentle and unassuming. Understated Taoist philosophy. It is also a kind of Internet slang, which is quite popular in life. Being low-key means hiding one's abilities and not showing them. Being low-key does not mean not doing things well, but not showing off the things done well. Searched one by one. This is what low-key means. I feel that the author has overunderstood the word low-key. The book is very good, I hope the author will update it more often!

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I don't like the kind that starts with just a few hundred million, is that interesting? It's still so high on the rankings, but what about the author! It's not like being more restrictive and low-key. It's not good if you don't let them get out of the way or wear your own car or clothes. This should be because they feel aggrieved! The restriction is not like this

It's pretty good. I wanted to give up countless times at the beginning of the book. After all, the system was a bit annoying. I think everyone who has read it should have this feeling. But I thought about it and let it go. After all, I firmly believe that an author is very serious. After reading more than 30 chapters, I felt an unprecedented sense of comfort. It was really comfortable to read. To be honest, the characters in the show are really well portrayed, but I'm also a little sad that the author won't appear again in future books. But it's normal when I think about it, after all, I was once a love rival. But I think William is really good (the name should be correct), and I hope to appear in it in the future. I will use my five-chapter-recommended vote every day to ask for it! Of course, there will definitely be a president in the future, after all, he is his own boss. The feeling is quite good. I suggest new readers who are planning to read this book not to give up if they feel angry at the beginning. This author is really a good person, well, a good person.

It looks okay, but the system settings are really toxic and force a low profile. If there was no system, maybe the score would be higher. As for the low-key theme, isn't the protagonist written by the author a rich second generation? He is participating in a love observation program. It is also written at the beginning that the protagonist wants to make friends and find a girlfriend. Then directly write that the protagonist does not want others to approach him because of his status as a rich second generation, but because he is a person. Isn't this low-key reason revealed? Now, because of the system, the protagonist is forcibly not allowed to use his skills and his own clothes are not allowed to be worn. If this book had no system and it was because the protagonist wanted to make friends and took the initiative to keep a low profile, then there would definitely not be so many people complaining about this. Moreover, judging from the comments, this is the result of correction. How bad would it have been before the correction (this 🔥Three or more are true love) Suggestions for future readers: 1. If you are tired of reading pretentious articles and can accept the system settings given by the author, you can read it. 2. If you can't accept the system settings, leave as soon as possible (like me). Actually, to be honest, this book is actually quite to my taste, because I have been looking for fan fiction or original novels for programs such as Heart Sign and It's So Nice to Meet You. It was so hard to find a copy of this system setting that I couldn't help but complain. The review ends here, see you in the future.

This book is very interesting, but the system is a bit confusing. So it doesn't look as comfortable as other books in the early stages. But it is precisely because of this that the book will become more enjoyable later on. The most important thing is that there are very few books that make me feel immersed in it. Like the same👍(/ω＼) shy

I have been watching pirated copies, but I don't know if there are many pirated copies. The author said it is so pitiful, so come and support it and vote. Downloading qq reading also cost me tens of M of traffic. Come on, author