Dad, Are You an Actor?

Is my book too depressing? Can you give me some advice?

This novel is the first one I've read in the women's clothing category that I've been waiting for the author to update a lot.

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As for the female protagonist, I haven't decided yet. The male protagonist is not yet twenty years old. There will definitely be other women in the book, and everyone has the desire to admire Ai. It's too early to decide on the heroine.

This book was first published on female channels, but no one commented on the female channels except for recommending it for collection. Maybe this book is too niche, but the film and television scripts I participated in were also my own original creations. But the writing style is limited, and there are too many original plots written, with no reference points and no sense of immersion. I originally wanted to write a cool novel, but I felt it conflicted with the character of the male protagonist. The male protagonist is too cautious, and the author himself was trapped by this male protagonist's setting.

Internal strength is not good, so I will lose one star.

I don't know why the name I just changed didn't work, so I changed it again.

The editor said it couldn't be reviewed and the name had to be changed. You can't bring women's clothing or disguises.

It's better to keep the hair. Besides, doesn't it just need to be kept to the shoulder position? If it exceeds the limit, wouldn't it be enough to trim it? Why does it have to be a man's haircut? The protagonist's mentality hasn't completely changed yet! ^Ω^

Since the male protagonist is a time traveler, why do you write so many plots about the original character? The first three chapters are all about memories... I really don't understand.