Rebirth of Japan and Writing Online Articles

I had this experience with a grandson: At seven years old, you enter elementary school. On the day you entered school, you were bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. Thirteen years old, you are at the peak of sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the aura of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet "the strong ones in the junior high school realm. Even the weakest junior high school strong men, their strength is definitely not matchable by you. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy chips! It's so scary. So you make up your mind to enter the junior high school realm. At the age of sixteen, you have achieved the junior high school realm. Through years of study, Study hard. You no longer look down on your classmates at the same level. The usual high school level is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the limitations of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the realm of university. Those who fail will lose this opportunity and become adults. In ancient times, some of them could become the most powerful people and obtain the Great Dao. It's almost difficult. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. In their eyes, your girlfriend who has been in love for four years is like an ant. The family promised your girlfriend to a young man from a big family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You only remembered that Lihua Daiyu had made a three-year appointment with you. You recalled the shame you experienced that day in elementary school. The veins on your hands were roaring. When I return, I will stain the sky with demonic blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, you choose the Internet. From then on, you joined a big company and spent your time studying on the toilet. From then on, you discovered a shocking secret and started your own business. , Encountered dangerous situations. From Beijing to Shanghai and then to Shenzhen, I met strong people who worked hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the mysterious old man, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from college. Three years later, the situation is calm, do you think he will come to the woman's home? At this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter. She had refused many blind dates arranged by her family in the past three years. Now she was almost at her limit. The sun was about to set. Is it just a disappointment? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's house. The mother-in-law's face turned slightly - - Change, their family has been in business for many years, but in the end it is just a small branch of the family. She has never forgotten the voice of Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, but this voice is different. Suddenly something came to mind, and his face turned pale. This is impossible. Even if I try hard for half my life, I can't do it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are all right. A man's voice came out. Suddenly, the house was silent. The mother-in-law asked cautiously where the residence was. The mother-in-law lowered her head in shame to prepare for the wedding. Needless to say, a year later, a man named Ma with glasses was riding. - A penguin visited. After some greetings, you were invited to enter the new map Zhengdao League (Internet Conference). When you entered, you found that there were about dozens of people present, and they all had unfathomable abilities. You could hear that I had no interest in money. I had not received a salary in a month. I was blind, and I didn't know whether it was beautiful or not. You couldn't help but be stunned when you recalled what you saw along the way.

It's a bit disgusting to see the protagonist travel through time and become a Japanese.

The advantage is that the description of the novel circle is realistic and believable. The disadvantage is that the characterization is terrible. 1. Male protagonist. In order to show his filial piety, the author arranged for him to send cosmetics and motorcycles to his mother, but he did not give her a penny of household expenses. The hero's mother works from the moment she opens her eyes in the morning until midnight every day. How much time and energy does she have to put on makeup? The reason for giving the motorcycle is so ridiculous that it makes it easier for her to work multiple jobs! The male protagonist must be a devil! If the male protagonist gives his mother a little money, wouldn't she not have to work multiple jobs, have time to put on makeup, or run around on a motorcycle? ! The author arranged this kind of plot purely in the name of choosing a gift for his mother, so that the male protagonist could pick up girls. The male protagonist is being made things difficult by the publishing house every day, and he has never thought about changing publishing houses. Doesn't the male protagonist have no self-esteem at all? Just because the editor-in-chief is a beautiful woman? ! 2. The ordinary female classmate who became an idol. This is the Internet era where mobile phones can access the Internet! There are no paparazzi or illegitimate meals in this book? A popular idol, he was so transparent in school that even his classmates' fans didn't recognize him. Author, you drank too much and didn't wake up. How can a popular idol be perfectly invisible! 3. Female editor. A piece of trash that has no merit other than good looks. The male protagonist said that the illustration was not good, so she ran to argue with the team leader; the team leader said that it could not be changed, so she ran to persuade the male protagonist. Why is she not smart at all? In addition to making an effective suggestion that the text is not Japanese enough, I will only pass on the words. Poor illustrations lead to dissatisfaction among readers. Shouldn't this matter be resolved by the editor? The author would like to reiterate that she is a good and conscientious editor! A good editor who pitches illustrations to authors? !

Do you really want to be Japanese that much?

The protagonist's personality has changed too much, and secondly, the strength of this book has collapsed.

Chapter 10 Decisively Abandoning the Book Too Erotic

The male protagonist seems to be very good at writing. He wrote tens of thousands of words of eloquent and exciting articles. It took such a long time to prepare for this. Just find a website or publishing house to serialize it directly, there are too many daily

This novel doesn't feel like it's on topic. The author writes it and always teaches everyone how to write novels. I'm not asking you to teach me how to write novels. I read novels.

It's not fun to complain about Riqing in the book, but it turns out that the writing is as verbose as Riqing, and there are so many daily ambiguities between women and the male protagonist. Is the male protagonist writing online articles or picking up girls when he travels back in time? The article is completely wrong.

Does the author usually read messages on QQ or QQ messages?