Reborn in Tokyo, Japan with the Quiba System

Are you sure you can't be a eunuch? Your last update was August 8th, but now it's already September 7th.

Brother, your novel is full of nonsense, I can tolerate it, but there are several repetitive paragraphs, which I cannot tolerate (ﾉ○Д○)ﾉ. We mainly came here for the word "Quiba". If it weren't for this, we would have run away long ago.

1. The subject matter is poorly chosen. I thought I was giving an example. Having never watched Quiba, I was completely confused when I read the power settings in this book. There is no sense of involvement at all. In comparison, anime such as One Piece, Naruto, and Bleach will definitely have a larger audience and a stronger sense of immersion. 2. The problem of writing style. After reading more than 30 chapters, there are two things that impressed me the most. The first is the author's literary youth disease when describing the environment. He would be verbose even if it rains lightly. The second is the author's description of female characters, which is a bit disgusting. There is no need to write down the appearance and clothing of a female character in such detail. Those who have read it will know that you are just over-elaborating on the number of words, while those who have not read it will think that you are going to be pornographic. 3. The problem of character establishment. I have been reading online articles for seven or eight years. During this time, I have seen Fat Man as the protagonist, but without exception, they all failed miserably. In contrast, an ordinary protagonist will have a better sense of immersion. 4. Plot issues. After reading dozens of chapters, I have always had a doubt, what is the focus of this book? Appearing as a saint in front of others? Ushering in an extraordinary era? Or are you trying to popularize Japanese geography and culture? The number of words in a chapter is about 2,000 to 2,500. I wrote a few hundred words about the weather at the beginning, a few hundred words about women in the middle, and then moved on to a few hundred words about Japanese customs and culture. How much of the rest is related to the plot? In addition, the battle plot is too awkward. Perhaps I have never seen a decent battle plot. I can give the author a suggestion here. It doesn't matter if you can't write the detailed battle process. You can just skip the battle process and write the ending directly. As long as it can highlight the abilities of the non-demon natives when encountering extraordinary powers, Shocked, it came out when I felt better. ... Finally, let me summarize. Niche themes may make you less exposed, but only excellent plot quality can make you really popular! Apart from that, all the alternative protagonists, beautiful characters and literary style are all false!

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on