I Teach Physical Education in Tokyo

Name: I Teach Physical Education in Tokyo
Author: Maple Leaves In Memory

by Maple Leaves In Memory

completed Light Novel Original Fantasy Male Lead

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257Kwords96chapters

Latest:

Ch. 96 — Failed

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About This Novel

Human heart and ghosts, desire and revenge The so-called monsters are you and me --The above is the inexplicable introduction to the second-grade version, and the following is the normal version: A young man who has been practicing (Buddhism?) In the mountains for more than ten years came down to become a teacher. The school where ghosts are rampant, but the boy who only has a handful of strength and Dharma Trying to be a competent physical education teacher PS: I mainly write about the students of the school. It's a group portrait, a group portrait, a group portrait! The protagonist is similar to One Punch Man, spending most of his time fighting

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Dried Sweet Potato Rice69mo ago

The writing is OK, but the protagonist is not.

Your writing about the protagonist always feels like a narration. In the first few chapters, I didn't even know what the protagonist was doing. Although you said that Saitama in One Punch Man is a soy sauce, but at least there is a sense of substitution. The protagonist you wrote has no sense of substitution. I always feel that the protagonist is not the protagonist. If possible, write a little bit of the protagonist's sense of substitution, but don't let the protagonist always play soy sauce. For novels in which the protagonist rarely appears, I have read many novels where the protagonist is invincible but not present. There will be a lot of bad reviews, and in the end it will be criticized by readers. If you have time, you can change it to give it a stronger look and feel, otherwise it won't feel like anything.