Splendid Peasant Queen, Please Say So

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I am forced to say something, and I will make a long comment by appointment. If any words are offensive, please forgive me. After reading the author's article, the title of the book clearly indicates the theme of the article, which is about ancient farming. After reading the introduction, the heroine's character should be a bit timid. It doesn't matter if she's not a traditional wild heroine, as long as she can express her own color, that's fine. The first chapter introduces the identity of the heroine in modern society, she is probably a senior white-collar worker or something like that, and she died a miserable and humiliating death. After traveling through time, she was a poor little orphan girl with a younger brother by her side. Moreover, the heroine's skills are quite comprehensive. Well, normally, a woman who dares to skin a rabbit and has taken a chef training class shouldn't be such a coward. The author wrote a little too fast at the time travel and turning points. It felt like he died casually and accepted the fact of time travel casually. In fact, the author's writing feels very fast-paced when reading it. Let's talk about some bugs-- The first one, bamboo shoots... Bamboo shoots are the favorite in farming articles. Does the author know when they became available? At this time, the siblings lived in a house without a roof, so they didn't get sick from the cold? The second one didn't go into the house to talk, but went to a big restaurant to talk. He stood at the door and only went in later. Aren't you afraid of blocking other people's business? The same goes for talking to Aunt Hua and Li Zheng. When they see people, they start talking without entering the house, just at the door. Third, Li Zheng is educated. The author's uncle Li Zheng is so educated that he doesn't feel like a common man farming the land, but like a big boss who lives in seclusion in the countryside. He also likes to educate people. Mr. Lin was also a powerful person. He actually worked as a teacher in the village but failed to get the first prize. Fourth, good people are too good. I need to talk about this in detail, let's talk about the restaurant that has business dealings with the heroine. It may be to set off the waiter. He is too approachable and is so polite when meeting. He meets the shopkeeper as soon as he asks for it, and uses the kitchen when he is asked... Is this a normal businessman? When doing charity, you have to check whether the other person is really poor or fake! And that Aunt Hua, that plot was quite embarrassing. A rural woman helped others casually without asking for anything in return, and casually believed that her two children were rich? This paragraph is too simple to write. If the author wants to develop this character, he should give her more scenes. That's right, you just bought the land when you said you were going to buy it? Did you even take it to the Yamen? Why does he believe so easily that the two children are rich? Let's not talk about money first. Do they have serious accounts? ... The fifth one is called "girl". The heroine is a little girl, and the merchant calls her a girl. The scene is so awkward. Sixth, the little girl uses porcelain to hold kimchi? It's really amazing. Seventh, there are too many modern words in the article, which is a bit confusing. ... All in all, the cool writing and sweet pet are all very qualified, and the heroine is quite her own. As for the plot, it can be regarded as a good story, but some details are not suitable for thinking... The above comments are limited to my humble opinion. If there is any offense, I hope you will forgive me or go back to my post.

When I was writing this article in the morning, a very interesting episode happened. Just look at the picture.

I didn't come here to stop short today. From Thursday to Sunday, I will start walking at 8,000. You should supervise me well, okay ^3＾.

If the author has a large number of words, he can apply for a contract. You can discuss the contract with your parents. The contract requires the signature of a guardian. I am also a minor. I discussed with my parents on the premise that writing novels will not affect my studies, and they agreed to let me sign. Finally, I wish the book a great success.

I left my phone at school on Saturday, and I didn't arrive at school until 9pm on Sunday. So I was tired and had no updates on Sunday and Saturday. So I just calculated it as 20,000, and starting from Monday, it will be 2,000 a day. Within this month, I will write down what I owe and ordinary updates and send them out, and that's it.

Dad, haven't you seen all of these?

I received a website error message today, which made me very happy.

I finally got up so early today