I Don't Dare to Play This Game Anymore

I have been reading online novels for almost nine years What can I say, the book is really good Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing style is a bit anti-routine at the beginning, and the writing style is very smooth and humorous. Some environmental descriptions render the overall atmosphere very well. The progression of the plot is very tight (not entirely an advantage) There are a series of settings such as the surface world, the inner world, and supernatural organizations, as well as the main plot of the divine pillars that conform to the Bagua. The past stories of each divine pillar can be seen that the author is quite careful. It is initially judged that the early outline should be very complete, and the probability of eunuchs is low. Let's talk about the shortcomings The author's description of the characters is remarkable On the one hand, the unique personalities of the characters are very three-dimensional, and the language and behavior of each character are very logical. However, because of the compact structure, many places where there should be a pause are a bit less than in many books. Although there is a suspicion of deviating from the main line from time to time, sometimes it is an opportunity to portray a character in a more three-dimensional way. Sometimes it is better to give some characters large or small settings, such as what they like to eat, or some special habits. This can not only make the characters more three-dimensional and lively, but also bury some foreshadowing. It depends on the author's operation. I don't know if the author is good at advancing emotional lines now. Preliminary judgment is that Song Qian is the heroine. My sister is not sure, or it is the above problem. The rhythm of the main plot is a bit too tight. If it keeps this rhythm, there is a high probability that a certain main plot will be forced to advance the main plot by a male channel's usual "there is no last resort, just to save her". It feels difficult Not obtrusive (it's okay to set the protagonist as a straight man until the end. Most authors who are not very good at advancing emotional lines do this. In fact, it's quite smart, but the premise is to portray a three-dimensional and preferably very lovable female protagonist. If the author originally wanted to write it like this, I didn't say it) In addition, I hope the author has his own thoughts I am just reviewing books that suit my taste as a reader. My suggestions must be suggestions that I think are in line with the public's thinking. The author's work is already very good. If it is forcibly changed to what I said, the author may not adapt. In that case, it is better to keep it as it is, but I hope that the original advantages can continue to be maintained (increase efforts) Please improve I posted it last Friday, but I don't know why it's gone.

Phew, silly Ji Han, he lied without even drafting a draft. You know, he was out for six hours last night. Who would believe him when he said he just went to the bathroom? Even if he didn't believe it after he said it, how could Ji Mo believe it?

The writing is okay, but I have a problem with my understanding of the protagonist. I always thought it was a game. Everything in the game brings reality. I still think it is a game, just like the protagonist is an NPC, which blocks my understanding of this aspect.

Well done, Ji Han had the foresight to turn off the pain system in advance during the battle, so that the absence of pain would not affect his combat effectiveness.

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The book has a fast pace, a lot of various jokes, and a full sense of suspense. The adventure plot and Dihua flow are intertwined. It is a good work.

①: There is no explanation for the origin, classification, and level of ability improvement. The fighting descriptions are dramatic, and the other supporting characters are dull NPCs. ②: The story line is too confusing and the logic is not clear enough. It is like wandering into the wild area with Pokemon. The scenes are very compact and come one after another. It seems that there is no rest in the 998 blessing report. It is very boring to watch too much. ③: The real world is marginalized. After reading hundreds of chapters, my brain cannot form a simple description of the world. It is empty.

It's not easy to get all the good reviews. Thank you for your hard work.

There are very few such novels written nowadays, and even less fascinating ones. I hope the author can work hard. I have read too many fighting and killing novels. I just want to read this kind of adventurous, weird and imaginative novels.

The book is very good. One thing I have to say is that I rarely read the original version. This time I paid to read the original version. Do you understand?