The Hero of Evil and the Creation Demon King

Let's talk about the shortcomings. First, who is the protagonist? To be honest, you didn't make it clear who the protagonist is. It was only after I watched it for the second time that I realized that Norman was probably the protagonist. Although you also created a personal profile, I read it too quickly the first time and didn't get a clear idea of ​​who the protagonist was. (Quietly complaining, I didn't expect that there was a cuckold next to the hero.) Secondly, what are the names of those skills? Are you just doing it for the word water? Do you remember that? Those weird α, β plus some weird characters? Forget it, this is just a complaint, the next step is the shortcomings. Thirdly, can you please update a little bit? Even if you stop updating, you will have to publish more than 3,000 words for one chapter. I don't like it. Also, the three golden chapters seem to have been wasted by you... I'm not sure. After all, I am only half-experienced in storytelling. Then there are the advantages: first, the sense of immersion is relatively strong. Anyway, after figuring out who the protagonist is, I am more involved. Second, there is a grand world view, and the power system of the world has been shown in the first three chapters. Does this mean that it requires a lot of writing? The third description is very good, but I dare not say that the characterization is good, but the character description is indeed good. Then I wish my brother a big hit. I am not afraid to tell you the story of my previous brother. He was killed by a book friend's blade because he did not update, so hurry up and update!

(Make up the number of words,,,,,,)