Tomb Robbing Starts from the Ancient City of Jingjue
About This Novel
Zhang Hao traveled through the world of tomb robbing to obtain the system at the beginning, and punched in at different places to obtain different rewards. Jingjue Ancient City, Longling Cave, Yunnan Worm Valley, Laojiumen, Tomb Robbing Notes, etc.
What Readers Think
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Official(10)Scraped 20h ago
Ghost Blows Out the Lamp and Tomb Robbery Notes
I just read the introduction and found out that the name Jingjue Ancient City is a coincidence, because the title of your work is related to tomb robbing, so it reminds people of tomb robbing notes. Also, your novel article has no punctuation marks. There are no double quotation marks "" or single quotation marks "". This will make readers uncomfortable. I hope it will be corrected. Maybe I will read it again in the future👀
Can't break sentences
The unbroken sentences look like talking to oneself,
Really don't call yourself by me
I don't think I'm immersed in it, so I'll delete it.
The plot is too fast
The plot is too fast and a little inconsistent, and one thousand words is too short. Come on!
A bit messy
My, my, my, what I mean is that no one knows where I am.
generally
After watching the plot, you still talk so much nonsense and add so much nonsense
fj
It's better not to have a heroine, it's okay to have one
Well enough
Sometimes updates are a bit slow but writing is okay
generally
Don't use personal pronouns like "I", it doesn't make sense.
Damn it
Don't write too fast, otherwise you won't have a plot later.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 20h ago
Ghost Blows Out the Lamp and Tomb Robbery Notes
I just read the introduction and found out that the name Jingjue Ancient City is a coincidence, because the title of your work is related to tomb robbing, so it reminds people of tomb robbing notes. Also, your novel article has no punctuation marks. There are no double quotation marks "" or single quotation marks "". This will make readers uncomfortable. I hope it will be corrected. Maybe I will read it again in the future👀
Can't break sentences
The unbroken sentences look like talking to oneself,
Really don't call yourself by me
I don't think I'm immersed in it, so I'll delete it.
The plot is too fast
The plot is too fast and a little inconsistent, and one thousand words is too short. Come on!
A bit messy
My, my, my, what I mean is that no one knows where I am.
generally
After watching the plot, you still talk so much nonsense and add so much nonsense
fj
It's better not to have a heroine, it's okay to have one
Well enough
Sometimes updates are a bit slow but writing is okay
generally
Don't use personal pronouns like "I", it doesn't make sense.
Damn it
Don't write too fast, otherwise you won't have a plot later.
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