The Second Senior Brother Came Out to Take the Blame
by I Don't Know The Depth Of The Clouds
About This Novel
"You peeked at someone taking a shower again?" "That's the third junior brother" "You bully a novice disciple again" "That's junior sister" "You are lazy in practicing" "That's Senior Brother"
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 12d ago
The writing is incomprehensible and messy. Please give me a five-star support. It's not easy to read your code.
Read a few chapters
If the protagonist has a scapegoating system, he will become stronger if he still takes the blame. If there is no protagonist and he still takes the blame, then we can only say that the protagonist is a SB.
The writing is completely incomprehensible, there is no sense of the situation at all, and the paragraphs are not good.
There is no sense of hierarchy and there is little progress. Come on, author.
It's okay to write, but it would be better if those leaflets in the middle weren't deleted.
The first 20 or so pictures of the old man feel very good, but the back ones are very messy.
It feels ok and you can watch it la la la
Are there missing chapters? It feels a bit confusing. It would be good if I closed it and re-wrote a chapter.
A different beginning, I like it very much, hope to speed up the update
Come on, update, the plot will be faster
Not bad
Just check it after you finish writing it, quality comes first.
So messy
The more I look at it, the more confused I become. There are a lot of pitfalls, but never pitfalls. I read the novel from a God's perspective, but I was confused. The relationship and background of the characters were never explained. What story did those women have with the protagonist?
Looking a little confused
It feels like some content is missing and it's a bit messy
Rating
Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 12d ago
The writing is incomprehensible and messy. Please give me a five-star support. It's not easy to read your code.
Read a few chapters
If the protagonist has a scapegoating system, he will become stronger if he still takes the blame. If there is no protagonist and he still takes the blame, then we can only say that the protagonist is a SB.
The writing is completely incomprehensible, there is no sense of the situation at all, and the paragraphs are not good.
There is no sense of hierarchy and there is little progress. Come on, author.
It's okay to write, but it would be better if those leaflets in the middle weren't deleted.
The first 20 or so pictures of the old man feel very good, but the back ones are very messy.
It feels ok and you can watch it la la la
Are there missing chapters? It feels a bit confusing. It would be good if I closed it and re-wrote a chapter.
A different beginning, I like it very much, hope to speed up the update
Come on, update, the plot will be faster
Not bad
Just check it after you finish writing it, quality comes first.
So messy
The more I look at it, the more confused I become. There are a lot of pitfalls, but never pitfalls. I read the novel from a God's perspective, but I was confused. The relationship and background of the characters were never explained. What story did those women have with the protagonist?
Looking a little confused
It feels like some content is missing and it's a bit messy
You Might Also Like
Urban Magic Doctor
Four Lines
Feijian Asked
I Eat Tomatoes
The Ninth in the World
Goose Is The Fifth Child
Rabbit Must Die
A Dream Of Huangliang
Reborn Female General
Qianshan Tea Guest
Lan Ke Qi Yuan
What A Hassle
Da Feng the Watchman
Newspaper Boy
Only in the Mahayana Period Does the Counterattack System Exist
The Whitest Crow
Gou Practices Secretly Next to the Female Devil
Afraid Of Spicy Red Pepper
Great Xia Literary Sage
Late July