Versatile Mage: Modify the Narration and Make Everyone Cheat
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[Multiple heroines] [Mu Ningxue] [Decisive in killing] [Modify narration] Ye Feng traveled through the world of full-time mage, obtained BUG-level golden fingers, modified the narration, and obtained treasure chests. 'Huozi' was changed to 'Fire Phoenix', and the mythical beast Phoenix came to the world. 'Thunder Seal' was changed to 'Thunder Dragon', and the ancient thunder dragon shocked the Holy City. The 'disaster of death' was changed to the 'disaster of the undead'. The army of the undead monarch destroyed the sea monster and captured the inland! ... A natural soul? Born with two lines? Fusion magic? Ye Feng not only cheated on his own, but also took all the girls to cheat with him! Many years later. Mu Nujiao: "The Forest of Elves - Bloom, elves, go fight the bad guys for me!" Mu Ningxue: "In front of my Snow Empire, everything will turn into ice slag!" Ye Xinxia: "Healing goddess, great resurrection! All the dead, please come back to life!"
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Official(61)Scraped 4d ago
The subject matter is good, but you, the author, don't know how to start a novel with poison. You really have no desire to continue reading. If you write fan fiction and you lick it, your novel will be useless. Let me tell you, you don't care how good or good the protagonist is, no matter how good the character is, if you lick it, I tell you that the novel will definitely be ruined, and the licking is unreasonable, and people don't even recognize it. I know you, you are still licking here. Alas, your novel is useless. I guess your 8.0 Rating will probably drop in the future. I advise you not to write it. Basically, no one will be fucking poisoned after reading the first one. People who start the game don't even know you, so you go up and stand up for others, lick others. Why do you write like this? Why don't you write other novels? Don't write fan fiction.
It does make sense. When I went in and saw this comment, I read the first chapter. I didn't expect it to be true. People don't even know you. You just traveled here and were so helpless. You didn't explore the situation properly. You stood up for the protagonist just after traveling. Do they need you to stand up? If you don't understand the situation, you just show off here. It is indeed very poisonous. After all, other fans have been playing with Mo Fan and the others since they were young. You, a stranger, are nosy here, and you will be treated as if you are here to lick Mo Fan. As far as I know, the reason why Zhao Kunsan hates Mo Fan is because when he was a child, he ran away with the eldest lady and his family was implicated. His family was originally mixed with the Mu family, and the whole family was greatly affected by Mo Fan's behavior. Zhao Kunsan felt that Mo Fan was self-righteous and had brought trouble to everyone, but he showed no fear or guilt. This behavior made him very dissatisfied. When Zhao Kun was a child, he was a member of Mo Fan's small group. They played well. Now the protagonist can't figure out the situation as soon as he travels through time, so he just sprays nonsense here and makes a fuss. You have nothing to do with Mo Fan at all. People are here asking what does it have to do with you. You are causing chaos here. You can read it for yourself. This is the content of the first chapter. I want to laugh every time I read it.
Shen Nong's comments were collected. After seeing this 100 chapters, I copied another fan book and couldn't stand it anymore. I couldn't even change it. I really want to lick Mo Fan, but I also want to snatch his wife away. If I don't want to lick him, the first chapter of the game is poisonous. Just read the first chapter and you will know. Just after time travel, I, a stranger, stood up for Mo Fan, and I have no relationship with her at all. Other fans stood up for Mo Fan. After all, they grew up playing with each other. This protagonist feels like a gangster after reading the first chapter.
Forced acquaintance, forced my brother, changed into a master cook, and also worked as a cook for Mo Fan, sx text
I couldn't stand it after reading the beginning. It's a complete nanny story. I couldn't stop licking Mo Fan.
Eunuch, stop updating.
It's time to cut up the book and let yourself go and let others go.
It's really speechless to just leave it there and revise it blindly. The first time you modify a person so that he cannot awaken the magic system, it means that he is of no use to you. Even if he awakens, his qualifications will not be very high. This is the second time I changed myself to a natural dual system and this is helpful. It's no use changing your cooking skills to mastery for the third time. The fourth time I changed my mother's personality to self-confidence. This was even more useless. She could obviously change it with companionship, so she had to waste the opportunity.
You spring water
The excuse you made is full of loopholes. Although it is a novel, your writing is a bit mindless.
This kind of modification is very stupid! You feel stupid when you write it, and you feel even stupider when others read it! This kind of invincible guy still needs to awaken magic? Your original narrator is passerby A! Directly change it to an invincible person, immortal body, magic exists because of you! You are magic! Or it may be changed into a law later because of you! This system is one of the most stupid! I wonder if you laughed when you wrote it again?
1. In order to make friends with Mo Fan, I can't say licking in the early stage, but my attitude is also close. The protagonist Goldfinger is so strong that he always changes some things that are not very important. When I look at the dual-elements of Take Me Sowing, I feel that the protagonist should be an accessory. How can I say that? A powerful Goldfinger has been used up, and a protagonist has become an accessory (￣ェ￣;) 2
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Official(61)Scraped 4d ago
The subject matter is good, but you, the author, don't know how to start a novel with poison. You really have no desire to continue reading. If you write fan fiction and you lick it, your novel will be useless. Let me tell you, you don't care how good or good the protagonist is, no matter how good the character is, if you lick it, I tell you that the novel will definitely be ruined, and the licking is unreasonable, and people don't even recognize it. I know you, you are still licking here. Alas, your novel is useless. I guess your 8.0 Rating will probably drop in the future. I advise you not to write it. Basically, no one will be fucking poisoned after reading the first one. People who start the game don't even know you, so you go up and stand up for others, lick others. Why do you write like this? Why don't you write other novels? Don't write fan fiction.
It does make sense. When I went in and saw this comment, I read the first chapter. I didn't expect it to be true. People don't even know you. You just traveled here and were so helpless. You didn't explore the situation properly. You stood up for the protagonist just after traveling. Do they need you to stand up? If you don't understand the situation, you just show off here. It is indeed very poisonous. After all, other fans have been playing with Mo Fan and the others since they were young. You, a stranger, are nosy here, and you will be treated as if you are here to lick Mo Fan. As far as I know, the reason why Zhao Kunsan hates Mo Fan is because when he was a child, he ran away with the eldest lady and his family was implicated. His family was originally mixed with the Mu family, and the whole family was greatly affected by Mo Fan's behavior. Zhao Kunsan felt that Mo Fan was self-righteous and had brought trouble to everyone, but he showed no fear or guilt. This behavior made him very dissatisfied. When Zhao Kun was a child, he was a member of Mo Fan's small group. They played well. Now the protagonist can't figure out the situation as soon as he travels through time, so he just sprays nonsense here and makes a fuss. You have nothing to do with Mo Fan at all. People are here asking what does it have to do with you. You are causing chaos here. You can read it for yourself. This is the content of the first chapter. I want to laugh every time I read it.
Shen Nong's comments were collected. After seeing this 100 chapters, I copied another fan book and couldn't stand it anymore. I couldn't even change it. I really want to lick Mo Fan, but I also want to snatch his wife away. If I don't want to lick him, the first chapter of the game is poisonous. Just read the first chapter and you will know. Just after time travel, I, a stranger, stood up for Mo Fan, and I have no relationship with her at all. Other fans stood up for Mo Fan. After all, they grew up playing with each other. This protagonist feels like a gangster after reading the first chapter.
Forced acquaintance, forced my brother, changed into a master cook, and also worked as a cook for Mo Fan, sx text
I couldn't stand it after reading the beginning. It's a complete nanny story. I couldn't stop licking Mo Fan.
Eunuch, stop updating.
It's time to cut up the book and let yourself go and let others go.
It's really speechless to just leave it there and revise it blindly. The first time you modify a person so that he cannot awaken the magic system, it means that he is of no use to you. Even if he awakens, his qualifications will not be very high. This is the second time I changed myself to a natural dual system and this is helpful. It's no use changing your cooking skills to mastery for the third time. The fourth time I changed my mother's personality to self-confidence. This was even more useless. She could obviously change it with companionship, so she had to waste the opportunity.
You spring water
The excuse you made is full of loopholes. Although it is a novel, your writing is a bit mindless.
This kind of modification is very stupid! You feel stupid when you write it, and you feel even stupider when others read it! This kind of invincible guy still needs to awaken magic? Your original narrator is passerby A! Directly change it to an invincible person, immortal body, magic exists because of you! You are magic! Or it may be changed into a law later because of you! This system is one of the most stupid! I wonder if you laughed when you wrote it again?
1. In order to make friends with Mo Fan, I can't say licking in the early stage, but my attitude is also close. The protagonist Goldfinger is so strong that he always changes some things that are not very important. When I look at the dual-elements of Take Me Sowing, I feel that the protagonist should be an accessory. How can I say that? A powerful Goldfinger has been used up, and a protagonist has become an accessory (￣ェ￣;) 2
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