Detection Department Shenhao

It's good-looking, a top-notch piece of fiction written by a great writer. The protagonist is low-key and connotative, and there isn't too much description of the plot of showing off and slapping people in the face! Like! Recommended for everyone to read! Come on, come on, come on, keep the rhythm, don't let it go, don't end it!

If you sell it yourself to Yuan Datou, others will offer you 1.7 Million. You said 1.5 Million is too high, that's enough. What do you think?

It's boring, nothing new, all kinds of women, it's like I've never seen women before, really...

It feels okay, but could there be less roommate plots? Many urban novels have college roommate plots that are really toxic. It doesn't matter if they are in a circle, because normally they live together after studying for four years, but in reality, after graduation, they go their separate ways and have no contact for a few years. They are no different from ordinary classmates, not to mention the environment of the dormitory. There is basically no air conditioning in a room with four people and six people. The hard single bed is smelly and smelly. I don't know if the protagonists who are rich and don't go out to buy a house and live in the dormitory are all sick. So in order to forcefully embarrass the plot, there is no need for subtitles. The key point is that the protagonist is just an ordinary person who is useless. The protagonist kills everyone in the mall, and then fights with a group of ordinary young people. It seems very disconnected, not to mention that the protagonist does not give away shoes, mobile phones and computers every time, but also gives away customers every time. The key point is that everyone takes it for granted. The protagonist is like a silly big-headed nanny. This book is not bad, and the protagonist of the novel takes him with him to make a fortune, and even gives away shares, the company, and his girlfriend. Can you avoid these poisonous points?

I can't stand the third chapter anymore. To buy a mobile phone, you have to go to sales. Is the protagonist a licker? If you see a girl, go up and lick her. I give you 8 stars. These are the three extra stars.

The protagonist treats his classmates to dinner and gives gifts every time. Even if he has money, he can't be so generous. After graduation, you will find that the so-called classmates and roommates are just ordinary people passing by, which does not help the protagonist at all. The length of the story should be shorter or even downplayed.

Your parents' income is 700,000 to 800,000 yuan a year. Tell me, can you use millet to make me laugh? Also, all fools who win 350,000 yuan by buying scratch cards know to go to the lottery center to get it and show it in person. . . Is there any problem with your quasi-lottery guessing and winning big prizes? Not to mention good luck, it can all be avoided. I feel like you wrote these first two chapters like a robot!

Stupid and stupid. This kind of Teddy novel is the most annoying. He's so powerful, why don't you pay him back by playing all kinds of low-level games?

Update, what are you thinking about? Speed, speed

Come on, Liu Yifei, Yang Mi, Dilmurat Dilmurat, Gu Li Nazha, Ju Jingyi, Zhao Lusi, Zhang Ruonan, Wu Xuanyi, Yang Chaoyue, can Sister Zhou win over those beautiful internet celebrities and female stars anyway?