
I Really Don't Want to Be a Winner in Life
About This Novel
He hated the life surrounded by luxury and wealth, and hoped to live an ordinary life in the next life. Unexpectedly, God still failed to let him go and let him be reborn directly. In order not to repeat the same mistakes and reach the top of his life, he married Bai Fumei, so Zhao Luo's life as a monster began again.
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Official(91)Scraped 19d ago
Still short of nine growth points
Use the valuable land to overcome the disaster, and the storm will thank you. . . . . . ...
Well, a proposal for you.
1. You write about a child, well, the one who engages in a harem is a bit difficult for ordinary people to accept. They always bring reality into novels, um, just like the Virgin, you can understand it, oh, you write according to your outline, you don't need to pay too much attention to them, it's a harem, that's a harem, there are so many warm flavors, and then you tell me that there is a single female protagonist, won't people think you are a scumbag? 2. Well, this is about a person who travels back in time 40 years in the future, so he should always know that some bad things and some good things have happened in the future. It can also be said that the various behaviors she did when she traveled back in time have mostly changed the original history. History will not cover his future direction and continue to develop, because the butterfly effect has changed history. 3. In this book, does the protagonist continue to grow up slowly, or is there a transition in the middle for the protagonist to grow up? I am embarrassed to impose my personal thoughts on this to you. It's just that I personally feel like children... That, you know. 4. I hope the author will take a good look at it. Finally, I wish the author good health.
Please update
Please be more explosive, please be more explosive, beg more explosive, important things should be said three times, and I sincerely hope that the author will not write about a harem, it would be great to have a female protagonist.
After reading a lot of comments, I summarized it
Most of those who don't like this book cannot accept the setting that the protagonist is reborn to be eight years old. There are also a very few who come here just to cause trouble and want to vent their anger. For example, in one article, I made a typo and actually scolded the author for changing his comment. I didn't even know I still had this authority, so I won't explain this part. Let's just talk about the eight-year-old setting. In fact, it is very simple. This is a long novel, and the time span is not calculated in days. It may be two or three years in the blink of an eye. The purpose is to let the protagonist experience various time periods. Also, the point is that this is a rebirth and funny story. Please do not rise to reality. I also hope not to ask questions such as how many wheels a real car should have, or whether the protagonist should like girls older than him...
About the later part of this book
Can the author not write about cultivating immortals or superpowers in the future? I'm tired of reading them, and it's easy to get distracted after writing them.
This is undoubtedly a masterpiece of a generation눈_눈
Is it poisonous? Is it really just smelting copper? Maybe there is something wrong with my personal thinking. I can still accept it if you switch between 18 and 28 years old. But between 8 and 18 years old... I believe in love again. And doesn't the protagonist dislike his previous life? I thought about it and he didn't want to change. . . Come here if you are stupid and want to criticize me, but don't come if you are smart. I can't scold you.
I can see some of the author's delicate thoughts in this book
I can tell from this book that the author is really writing with care, but another problem is exposed, that is, the emotional line of this book is a bit complicated. If you don't read it from the beginning to the end, you can't understand the emotional line at all, and the writing style needs to be improved. The key is the protagonist's Age is a problem, and there is also forced intelligence reduction. Many good books will not forcefully reduce IQ. They will use emotional lines that make readers shine to reduce the presence of other people. It can be said that this kind of harem novel looks the most comfortable, but if you want to send a girl. . . . Sorry, we are here to read a novel, not to find someone who is uncomfortable. Well, I should be leaving anyway. Even if the protagonist's initial age is a junior high school student, I can understand it. When he is an elementary school student, he runs into a teacher-student relationship. It is said that his soul is an uncle, but he The approach is like a child. I hope the author can take a closer look at the writing method of dark writing, semi-dark writing, which is laid out from the beginning to the end, and readers cannot see through it. After the layout is completed, some people with high IQs can see through it. That's it.
This book is very good
It's just that the relationships between the characters are a bit complicated, the relationship between the Su family and the An family, the relationship between the Su family and the Zhao Jia family, the internal relationships within the Su family, and the protagonist's QQ don't actually associate it with reality, so a lot of improvements need to be made.
Don't write about special abilities or anything like that, just write about daily life.
Don't write about superpowers and cultivating immortals, just write about daily life.
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Rating
Community(0)
Official(91)Scraped 19d ago
Still short of nine growth points
Use the valuable land to overcome the disaster, and the storm will thank you. . . . . . ...
Well, a proposal for you.
1. You write about a child, well, the one who engages in a harem is a bit difficult for ordinary people to accept. They always bring reality into novels, um, just like the Virgin, you can understand it, oh, you write according to your outline, you don't need to pay too much attention to them, it's a harem, that's a harem, there are so many warm flavors, and then you tell me that there is a single female protagonist, won't people think you are a scumbag? 2. Well, this is about a person who travels back in time 40 years in the future, so he should always know that some bad things and some good things have happened in the future. It can also be said that the various behaviors she did when she traveled back in time have mostly changed the original history. History will not cover his future direction and continue to develop, because the butterfly effect has changed history. 3. In this book, does the protagonist continue to grow up slowly, or is there a transition in the middle for the protagonist to grow up? I am embarrassed to impose my personal thoughts on this to you. It's just that I personally feel like children... That, you know. 4. I hope the author will take a good look at it. Finally, I wish the author good health.
Please update
Please be more explosive, please be more explosive, beg more explosive, important things should be said three times, and I sincerely hope that the author will not write about a harem, it would be great to have a female protagonist.
After reading a lot of comments, I summarized it
Most of those who don't like this book cannot accept the setting that the protagonist is reborn to be eight years old. There are also a very few who come here just to cause trouble and want to vent their anger. For example, in one article, I made a typo and actually scolded the author for changing his comment. I didn't even know I still had this authority, so I won't explain this part. Let's just talk about the eight-year-old setting. In fact, it is very simple. This is a long novel, and the time span is not calculated in days. It may be two or three years in the blink of an eye. The purpose is to let the protagonist experience various time periods. Also, the point is that this is a rebirth and funny story. Please do not rise to reality. I also hope not to ask questions such as how many wheels a real car should have, or whether the protagonist should like girls older than him...
About the later part of this book
Can the author not write about cultivating immortals or superpowers in the future? I'm tired of reading them, and it's easy to get distracted after writing them.
This is undoubtedly a masterpiece of a generation눈_눈
Is it poisonous? Is it really just smelting copper? Maybe there is something wrong with my personal thinking. I can still accept it if you switch between 18 and 28 years old. But between 8 and 18 years old... I believe in love again. And doesn't the protagonist dislike his previous life? I thought about it and he didn't want to change. . . Come here if you are stupid and want to criticize me, but don't come if you are smart. I can't scold you.
I can see some of the author's delicate thoughts in this book
I can tell from this book that the author is really writing with care, but another problem is exposed, that is, the emotional line of this book is a bit complicated. If you don't read it from the beginning to the end, you can't understand the emotional line at all, and the writing style needs to be improved. The key is the protagonist's Age is a problem, and there is also forced intelligence reduction. Many good books will not forcefully reduce IQ. They will use emotional lines that make readers shine to reduce the presence of other people. It can be said that this kind of harem novel looks the most comfortable, but if you want to send a girl. . . . Sorry, we are here to read a novel, not to find someone who is uncomfortable. Well, I should be leaving anyway. Even if the protagonist's initial age is a junior high school student, I can understand it. When he is an elementary school student, he runs into a teacher-student relationship. It is said that his soul is an uncle, but he The approach is like a child. I hope the author can take a closer look at the writing method of dark writing, semi-dark writing, which is laid out from the beginning to the end, and readers cannot see through it. After the layout is completed, some people with high IQs can see through it. That's it.
This book is very good
It's just that the relationships between the characters are a bit complicated, the relationship between the Su family and the An family, the relationship between the Su family and the Zhao Jia family, the internal relationships within the Su family, and the protagonist's QQ don't actually associate it with reality, so a lot of improvements need to be made.
Don't write about special abilities or anything like that, just write about daily life.
Don't write about superpowers and cultivating immortals, just write about daily life.
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