Return Slowly

How can I put it this way? The concept of this article is quite good and the writing is smooth and rigorous. However, the writing technique is not pleasing to the eye! First, the lonely female protagonist has too many psychological monologues, which makes people feel less warm, and makes many turning points unclear; second, the first showdown between the male and female protagonists is a long confession by the male protagonist, and then the so-called bystanders help the male protagonist clear his name, which is a little less convincing; third, the relationship between the male and female protagonists There is a long chapter about their low self-esteem, distrust and concealment from each other, which has always cast a lingering haze on this relationship. Until the last few chapters, the heroine suddenly "awoke", but it makes people feel that the disagreement and misunderstanding between the two people are due to the heroine's cold face and warm heart. She failed to give the male protagonist a sense of security, which makes people shudder. ~; Fourth, the description of the male protagonist is not adequate. From the beginning to the end of the play, he is cold, sultry, cruel and calculating (including his treatment of the female protagonist), which is like a mental illness, which makes people unlikable; fifth, the various compromises of the female protagonist are over-emphasized, until the end, all kinds of backlashes are suddenly made for the real reunion. , Took the initiative to give the male protagonist a sense of security, but he was suddenly taken advantage of, and there was no sense of smoothness; sixthly, many details were not written well, for example, the male protagonist's wife's extra story was written, and there was so much blank space. Oh~~ Well, that's all, if it is changed and expanded, it might be a good drama.

How should I put it, this book feels too cold

I feel like I haven't finished writing... Wasn't Wen Heng lucky enough to enjoy the dance he performed for his sweetheart? And the lost child, was it just covered up?

The feeling of not finishing the story, a dance, the lost child, whether the male protagonist knows that Xiaobai is his child, Qi Zhun's ending...

It feels a bit regretful that the male protagonist did not know until the end that the female protagonist had conceived a child for him before. Perhaps this may be the suspense left by the author. He deliberately wrote it this way to let us understand that the heroine loves the hero so much that she will not even care about the child she lost for the hero. But it also felt a bit like revenge against the male protagonist. The male protagonist hid so many things from the female protagonist, and the female protagonist also wanted revenge, so she didn't tell the fact that she had a child. But I think the former is more likely. All in all, this article is memorable and unforgettable. Author, I look forward to your next work!

"Time flies and life is short. Don't waste your time arguing, apologizing, feeling sad and blaming. Use your time to love, even if it's only for a moment, don't let it go."

The person who was good to you went to jail for you, but you didn't care. The person who cheated you, but you tolerated and gave in again and again. It's really cowardly.

I have struggled, hesitated, and been afraid, but in the end I was defeated by irreplaceable love, and I can no longer deceive myself. Even if we lose everything, we are still willing to do so

Many plots are vague and pretend to be profound.

The ending is a bit paradoxical and inexplicable. It doesn't quite match the beginning. I don't quite understand the author.