People Are in Douluo, Wuhun Demon Xuluo

I came here after watching the book recommendation video. I remember that Moxuluo's adaptation mechanism will start to adapt after being attacked until the adaptation is completed. Taking damage in the middle will only accelerate the adaptation process, and the simpler things are, the faster they adapt, such as slashes and light beams. These are pure physical or energy damage. It takes a few seconds to complete a circle of adaptation, absorbing the feeling of the soul ring. The feeling is similar to these. I remember that the absorption of soul rings in the original work can be interrupted. You can first find someone who is more than 100 years old to adapt to it, and then interrupt it. After the adaptation is completed, you can absorb all the soul rings, that is, ten million years, one hundred million years can be absorbed. Of course, the author should not write like this. If he writes like this, he will not be able to continue writing, and he will be directly invincible.

Let me reply here, this book is anti-Tang San, but it will not be embarrassing. If it is embarrassing, it won't have that feeling. You can't just say that he is Tang San, and then just be anti-Tang San, right? It is always necessary to write about what Tang San is like to have a more realistic feeling. There is also the Wuhun Palace, which is indeed the best among the several forces in the original work, but it can only exist as a religion and not an empire. Therefore, in the early stage, it will feel that the protagonist is on the side of the Wuhun Palace, and in the later period, he will make a difference and create his own force. Finally, please ask for follow-up reading and monthly tickets! ! !

The subject matter is okay, but the plot is inexplicable, the writing is average, and the protagonist's head is a bit pointy.

I wrote this fanfic because I wanted to try writing a book. There will be battles, relationships, and self-designed characters. What I want to practice are emotional lines and character design. How could I not write them. If you want to read a pure battle novel without emotional lines or a stallion's harem, you will be disappointed. I saw some people commenting that they want to watch it from beginning to end, or they don't want to watch the love story but want to watch the heroine. Let's find out about it in advance. After all, in addition to the free chapters, it costs money, so avoiding it in advance will save you money, right? Because I haven't been writing the book for a long time, I lack experience. Some of the protagonist's flaws were set by me. After all, no normal person would grow up instantly as soon as he traveled through time. Not to mention that it is logical enough to form a self-contained world system, I still want to avoid at least something that can be noticed. The protagonist is an ordinary person who travels through time and there is a growth plot, so I will design some of his shortcomings, but the abusive protagonist will not have them, because it is the core of a refreshing novel. There is also a poisonous point that I couldn't notice. When I wrote about the sworn sworn relationship, I just wanted to make a joke at the end. I really don't know what the poisonous point is, but maybe the protagonist can't be inferior to others? Avoid this when writing later. Well, what else is there to say. The main thing is the emotional line, because I won't write fan fiction all the time, and I won't arrange it casually according to the existing routines. I will never give up on the emotional line no matter what. If you want to see the harem and the stallion, if you want to meet one and fall in love with the other, don't waste your time on this book. There are also some people who specialize in writing bad reviews, but I have no choice. The book has not made money yet, and I don't want to spend money to get good reviews, so I can only hide the ones that I can't read for a minute and only look at the title to find problems. If something is particularly outrageous, they will still choose to stay, which can be regarded as a negative example. Those who write negative reviews can refer to this to avoid pitfalls. Negative reviews should also be written with a certain level of skill, right? If you are not dedicated, no one will come to you to write negative reviews. This book will be written until it is finished, and no one will read it until it is finished. I am also learning from the normal comments about the problems with the selection of the protagonist and the allocation of resources. The negative reviews made me angry, and they told me about the plot at the beginning. In the final analysis, I am still bothered by the fact that I didn't see the [single heroine] label clearly and deliberately gave negative reviews. Since we have a single female protagonist, we must write detailed emotional lines. It would be much easier if I didn't write emotional lines. Anyway, I will love one when I see one, and accept one when I see one. In this way, there are self-created characters, emotional lines, and mind wandering.

Personally I think it's pretty good, at least better than most of my fans.

If a single heroine doesn't have a harem, there will be twists and turns in the relationship, and she won't fall in love at first sight or anything like that. There is also the issue of updating. You can tell that I didn't write too many routines, right? Because I am practicing writing fan fiction, I definitely believe that writing more is better. I need to write more to practice my writing skills. As long as I'm not scolded for breaking the defense or no one is watching, I won't stop updating. At least 6,000 per day, if the data is good, 10,000 per day. My hand speed is not bad.

Generally! It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

It is a rare work that does not make friends with the supporting characters around the protagonist, but chooses to make friends with those minor supporting characters that are not well described in the original work.

. . . You can watch it, but the plot is mediocre and the protagonist is sometimes over-the-top.

The writing is so cool, good luck to the author