Becoming an Immortal Begins with Marrying a Wife

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. Me No watching dramas, no traveling, no getting sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words. It's like this day and night.

The beginning was okay. Writing becomes more and more like plagiarizing while watching porn. Do all current authors think in the following way?

I don't know what it is, but I feel like this book has been written by someone else. The title and book title are the same. That word is more, this word is less.

There is basically no content, just looking for the harem, what to do during the day, and what to do at night. Anyway, there is nothing else except that. Fighting is just a move and there is no scene at all.

Everyone is welcome to make suggestions, the author will read them.

The logic is relatively clear, but in Shuangwen it is really clear. The cautious character of the protagonist is perfectly formed, and the characters of other characters are also very good. It can be regarded as one of the better heroines in the novel. The reason is that the plot is compact and the character creation cannot be more in-depth. It just seems that the sense of violation is not that strong. I don't think so that the author is disgusting. I don't think so. It is a very good novel. This kind of plot is about the wives and can even be made into an anime! Once again, give the author a try and try hard not to make this book unfinished and the subsequent plot not to look good. Anyway, give it a try!

I'm convinced, where is this world of cultivating immortals? It's like entering a forbidden area for humans. There are bullies inside the city and monsters outside the city.

The details are really detailed, the part-time job is really detailed, the spiritual stones are earned half a dollar, the rent is quite expensive, an alchemist is too good to be a systematic alchemist, the first level is advanced, and he can't even know a decent elixir. There are no martial arts, no martial arts, and no weapons, just relying on double cultivation dozens of times a day to show affection. He does three things every day: go to bed, practice elixirs, and show off his love. There is no trace of cultivating immortality. Forget about the light and sex, but it's all done in one stroke, just show affection and do some details, running down the accounts, it's too big, I can't beat it every day, and using dust bombs, I guess the foundation building can also be blown up.

The author needs to improve the plot. There are too many erotic plots. The main thing is to focus on spiritual practice and fighting skills.

You don't write any of your fighting spells? There is no flying sword in the foundation building stage A spell is not introduced