After Listening to the Advice, I Live Broadcasted the Cultivation of Immortality
About This Novel
Chen Jin originally wanted to sell tea live, but netizens didn't like it. I have no choice but to live broadcast the cultivation of immortality... What should I do if my body is deficient? Netizens suggested: Do both internal and external cultivation What should I do if I can't introduce air into my body? Netizen suggestion: Online shopping for spiritual stones What should I do if a monkey goes up the mountain to steal medicine? Netizens suggested: Blow the suona What should I do if the thunder method is too difficult to understand? Netizens suggested: Connect to 10KV high-voltage electricity What should I do if my cultivation speed is too slow? Netizens suggested: Open the furnace to make elixirs What should I do if the talisman making is too complicated? Netizen suggestion: printer printing What to do if there is no magic weapon? Netizen suggestion: 1000-layer Damascus Sword "Family members, we must believe in science!" Bang~ A thunderbolt fell. "Family members, I'm going to get through this first. I'll talk about science later~"
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Official(12)Scraped 8d ago
There's no need for women's clothing or anything like that. Special quirks won't attract new readers, they'll just distract those who read them normally.
Ten words to step on the horse, ten words to step on the grandma
Just add a woman in
Even if it's frustrating to write, I'd also add a female police officer. Why, it can't be written without a woman?
This book suppresses the main character so much. Most people who write books are in a cadence, but this one is in a cadence. I'm over 70 and I haven't seen anything that is genteel.
Looking for the abbot in the Taoist temple
A Taoist priest is not an abbot, a Taoist priest is not a monk
Five three to five five repeated
Chapters 53 to 55 are repeated, author
There's also the dialect, maybe it's intentional.
How many times have others bullied you?
You can use pig's feet to learn martial arts, but you can't do assassination?
Speechless, it's been 6 chapters, I haven't reached the point yet, others are eager to listen to the advice immediately, but here you are, you are such a thief with ink marks, it's disgusting.
No, it's too tedious. There must be detailed descriptions, but not just every little thing or chore. If all the details are described and the beginning is like this, then the author will know how to write. I don't know if it's poisonous or not. Maybe it's so boring that I haven't seen it yet.
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Community(0)
Official(12)Scraped 8d ago
There's no need for women's clothing or anything like that. Special quirks won't attract new readers, they'll just distract those who read them normally.
Ten words to step on the horse, ten words to step on the grandma
Just add a woman in
Even if it's frustrating to write, I'd also add a female police officer. Why, it can't be written without a woman?
This book suppresses the main character so much. Most people who write books are in a cadence, but this one is in a cadence. I'm over 70 and I haven't seen anything that is genteel.
Looking for the abbot in the Taoist temple
A Taoist priest is not an abbot, a Taoist priest is not a monk
Five three to five five repeated
Chapters 53 to 55 are repeated, author
There's also the dialect, maybe it's intentional.
How many times have others bullied you?
You can use pig's feet to learn martial arts, but you can't do assassination?
Speechless, it's been 6 chapters, I haven't reached the point yet, others are eager to listen to the advice immediately, but here you are, you are such a thief with ink marks, it's disgusting.
No, it's too tedious. There must be detailed descriptions, but not just every little thing or chore. If all the details are described and the beginning is like this, then the author will know how to write. I don't know if it's poisonous or not. Maybe it's so boring that I haven't seen it yet.
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