The Great Taiyin Emperor

It turned out to be a toad that took the form of a toad. Just thinking about it makes me sick.

What does a man call Wangshu? It's weird. You wrote the protagonist as a female, and that's a good name. But if you wrote the protagonist as a male, you use such a girly name. Why, the male protagonist can also sing and dance basketball?

Damn rubbish novel, rubbish setting.

The more I look at it, the more I feel something is wrong, a bit messy

I skipped through a few chapters, and in some places I used idioms and poems indiscriminately. Probably for the purpose of embellishment, to show the ink in the chest. However, Confucius said that when quality is superior to literature, it will be wild, and when literature is superior to quality, history will be achieved. The plot is mediocre, large passages are quoted, and too many ancient texts affect the viewing experience. For online novels, it is superfluous. This kind of novel itself must be concise and clear, and only with content can it attract readers. The author can try to tell the story in a straightforward way without adding so much. (You can see that you want a classical Chinese narrative. Why don't you look at the four major classics? They are just vernacular novels, but your narrative is much more advanced) Of course, I only read a little bit and made a few comments, without any malice.

I came here after reading the introduction. Wangshu is actually a man. Speechless😓

To be honest, Wangshu should have been born during the fierce beast calamity, but died later, and then the Taiyin Star continued to give birth to the second generation of the Moon God.

I think it's okay, it's pretty good

What you write is too rubbish. Stop writing. It's a mess.

Change the track. Dream of Red Mansions or romance are more suitable for you.