Death Lord under the Holy Light

The positive reviews are as follows: 1. The subject matter is novel. The protagonist travels from the earth to the interstellar era. In the interstellar era, he grows up from a baby, which is considered localized. 2. Because of the game, billions of people travel through it, and the vastness of the other world, which is in the same universe as the local planet, the system of this book can be written. The negative reviews are as follows: 1. So far, the protagonist has been fooling around in a small place and never left. He is trapped by the author and this huge system is wasted. 2. Treasure, how can we lack such cool points? Human nature is driven by profit. Without these, how can we feel better? 3. For example, there is no deep development of the local planet, there is no deep interaction between family members, and there is no deep interaction between hundreds of millions of people, so I won't talk about it. In short, the author is painting cakes and filling in the water. If it weren't for the rarity of this kind of system, and if I wanted to know the direction of the subsequent story, I would have abandoned it long ago.

It doesn't feel so smooth when reading, and it's a little stiff. Did the author write too hastily? As an old bookworm, I feel it's quite accurate. For example, when the protagonist goes to a dessert shop where he has to wear a maid outfit, right? The reason is because of training resources, but there is no foreshadowing at the beginning, and there is no explanation of salary or the like at the end, resulting in a lack of realism in this part. For example, when I bring my girlfriend home for the first time, I mentioned earlier that my parents are a bit funny, so they make room for the protagonist to get things done. This makes sense, but the description of the girlfriend is too little, and the character skeleton is not well constructed. The author is just going to write that the protagonist and his girlfriend want to have close contact. Is it too hasty? The relationship may have reached this stage, but for the readers, it is not until Chapter 10. They have no idea about the heroine's life experience or what kind of person she is. Now she starts to get things done?

The content did not match the title and introduction of the book. It made me think I had traveled to a fantasy world.

A pieced together mess is not a thing, and it is considered a bad book among bad books.

If you don't write that, don't use that name.

Good, good, good ^_^♪

I can't bear to kill a beautiful woman.

Great. Come on, I will always support you.

I just write back and forth about a few characters. The author, are you afraid that you have forgotten something?

Before leaving, if you can't continue from Chapter 6 to Chapter 7, 4 stars will be deducted.