
The Naughty Kid Wants to Cultivate Himself
About This Novel
How to treat naughty children violently and effectively? Waiting online, quite urgent.
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Official(5)Scraped 25d ago
The content is good, but the punctuation and paragraphing need to be strengthened.
come on
Great, this naughty kid is too naughty.
Grow wildly and live up to your will, come on!
Punctuation and sentences should be smoother
Give you some advice
Although I was also desperate, signing the contract with Genesis was not a big problem. Let me tell you why your website is not short. Traditional novels of your type are not popular now. The title of the book should be sexy, and there should be more paragraphs. Each paragraph should not exceed four lines. Now you can basically sign a contract if you write the Tenten-ryu, Wankai-ryu, Doujin-ryu, or Alien Beast-ryu, so I advise you to cut it and write it again.
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Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 25d ago
The content is good, but the punctuation and paragraphing need to be strengthened.
come on
Great, this naughty kid is too naughty.
Grow wildly and live up to your will, come on!
Punctuation and sentences should be smoother
Give you some advice
Although I was also desperate, signing the contract with Genesis was not a big problem. Let me tell you why your website is not short. Traditional novels of your type are not popular now. The title of the book should be sexy, and there should be more paragraphs. Each paragraph should not exceed four lines. Now you can basically sign a contract if you write the Tenten-ryu, Wankai-ryu, Doujin-ryu, or Alien Beast-ryu, so I advise you to cut it and write it again.









