Honghuang: I Have an Island in the South China Sea

The author's mark is the same as my personal mark. Besides, it doesn't matter what you write. If you write about The Great Age yourself, you have to write out your own characteristics. You can't just copy what others wrote. We can add some of the advantages of others to improve our own works. I hope the author will not collapse. Come on, if anyone knows what kind of stone this is, I personally think it is jade, but he is a stone boy.

It's all a question and answer for one person, so why should we look at it. Why don't you write out the outline and we'll watch it, and the whole show will be over! ?

You can take a look, it's very good, ah ah ah ah ah ah

The part of Sanqing was too messy. In terms of cause and effect, only Sanqing owed anything. From the beginning of Pangu to the later time when Sanqing separated treasures, it can be said that he owed Qinglian a big cause and effect. The main character is Bailian, who is a descendant of Qinglian. What do you think the main character owes is only owed by Sanqing. The part of Fengzu is even more chaotic.

It's all introduction or narration, and any bit of plot is accompanied by a lot of explanations. When I read novels, it's not about your translation.

The cause and effect in the previous chapters is really like that of Wu Dayu

1. Ask and answer yourself less, so no readers will ask you. 2. Use the words "actually" sparingly. Almost no paragraphs have it. 3. There is less self-narration and explanation, it is too wordy. 4. "I said it before" you should write less, don't forget it ...

The writing is clear and watery, without distinction between cause and effect, forced to start a group, timid, whoever looks at it s 13

There are too many explanations. We are reading novels, not your complaints.

One who attains Hunyuan is a saint. Rule the universe, go through thousands of tribulations without weariness, be stained by cause and effect without being stained. Always with heaven, coexisting with Tao. The sage is almost omniscient and omnipotent. The sage is the "Tao". The saint has a clear understanding of all things and the vast world. He can see the past, present and future with his eyes, and play time and space, birth and death, and reincarnation in his palms. As soon as the thought moves, there will be changes in the way of heaven. It is infinite and limitless, has no birth and no death, returns to the quiet void, can be gathered and dispersed, neither born nor destroyed, will not be worn out for all eons, transcends time and space, causes and effects do not touch the body, swims outside things, is not based on the reincarnation of time and space, and exists forever.