The Adventures of Jackie Chan: I Don't Lack Anything Now

You can't write about anything other than the torturer, right?

Since you are writing a fanfic and using the background of the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures, and the original setting is to travel through time and become a fire demon, then you have to follow other people's settings. You create your own plot and you can't change it too far. This has gone astray. In the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures, you didn't write Zhutianliu and went to other worlds. Then you have to follow the settings. The setting of Zhengqi and Black Qi is other people's basic setting. Your plot in the first 50 chapters is too abrupt. When the Black Qi is at its peak. The eight demons are invincible and must rule the world. The era will not end until the righteousness suppresses the eight demons of black energy again. Just like in the following plot, when the righteousness is at its peak, even ordinary people without power can use some suitable things and a little magic to beat the eight demons back to hell.

After reading the first 60 chapters, the protagonist seems a bit stupid, not taking any active actions at all, but all being passive. Such as taking the initiative to use the balance of yin and yang, cultivating righteousness mage yourself (the quality is not enough, the quantity is enough), actively enhancing the power of righteousness, and then raising the upper limit of black energy. In a word, it's quite satisfactory, the protagonist is too stupid🤗

Even a human slave can question the protagonist's decision. As a Holy Lord, the protagonist has no majesty.

It's too early for you, there are still some things in your private equipment. You made the Holy Lord too powerful in the early stage. The Holy Lord lost, which greatly affected the sense of substitution. It's still a little early for the plot. Then the way you are dealing with it now, you can't break through the seal before the plot is reached. So what's the difference between this and the original work?

In Jackie Chan's world, yin and yang are balanced. As the evil side, there will be a great mage, and as a righteous side, there will be a big boss.

The Holy Master has prepared so much, he won't be defeated, right? If you really lose, it will be a bit unlike Shuangwen. I'll give it five stars first and see what happens next.

The masters under the First Emperor are all from outside the human race, and there are no top masters from the human race under his command. Just like this, he has the nerve to awaken humanity. After awakening, who will be the spokesperson for humanity? Even if the First Emperor becomes the spokesperson, there is no human race at the top of the forces under his command. It is not that the power has been emptied out, and there is a Mao.

I'm speechless =_=, it was obviously the Eight Immortals and the eight little devils who used the history books, but it backfired on other people. It's really awesome.

The author should not forget the nature of the world of "The Adventures of Jackie Chan". It's the balance of yin and yang. The theme line of the entire plot is that the balance of yin and yang is the mainstay of justice. You ask me where the balance is in the original work? How many did Black die? At the beginning of Chaos, it was Black's era when the overbearing demons rolled into hell. Black Qi ruled for who knows how many years. Later, the Black Qi side developed again. The Holy Lord came out to rule Asia again. Later it was sealed by Lope. To put it bluntly, "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" now belongs to an era dominated by righteousness.