Qing Yu Nian: I, the Prince, Will Marry Fan Ruoruo at the Beginning

Um, did the author really not notice that the follow-up reading was missing? Qing Yunian's original work is basically a good novel. Let's not talk about it. The author's earlier version of the novel was also a good one. The act of suddenly suppressing the protagonist's combat power and reducing the protagonist's original problems will have an impact on the existing reputation of the novel. You should have read a lot of novels, so you can think about how you feel when you usually see such novels. Not to mention that this is a mixed martial arts work, there are many places to write about, and it is not limited to Qing Yu Nian. In addition, you, the author, can also tell from the previous plot that, firstly, you do not have the deep garden drama skills of the Red Mansions fan authors, so you are not suitable for writing about the love between children in the harem. Secondly, you are not a literature major in a prestigious school or have the deep knowledge of ancient culture like the leading Three Kingdoms authors. Thirdly, you are not proficient in the original works of Mao Ni and other authors. As an author of the above three points, you cannot make significant progress in a short period of time. Changing existing articles rashly will only further lose existing readers. If you are really writing the current novel and suddenly come up with any good ideas, you can collect them and write them in detail in the next book. After a hundred chapters, the plot will become more and more serious, which is not a good thing.

We have entered the testing period. Readers who think the writing is good can follow up and read it. This is really important to me! If you have a recommendation vote in hand, everyone who has a monthly ticket can vote for it. Thank you very much! Don't keep books during the testing period, otherwise they will fall out if you are not careful! Everyone is welcome to catch bugs in the comment area! Thank you all for your support! If you have any ideas, please leave them in the comment area and I will reply!

Come on, it's very well written. I voted for you.

It's good, but there's too much political content, and the sense of system and force presence is too low.

The world view is so grand that it was difficult to write. Come on💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

The author will update soon, the best Qing Yu Nian fan I have ever seen

Come on, author, write well. I originally read the beginning because it is an ordinary mindless novel. I didn't expect that the writing will get better and better afterward. It captures the feeling of a battle of wits and courage. The more I read, the more beautiful it becomes. Please come on, author, and write.

I thought it would be better to be smart when writing Qing Yunian fan stories. What would it be like to tell Li Yunrui that Fan Xian is Ye Qingmei's son? A time traveler with a system written like a straw bag, let's see who is using it?

1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?

Although there are many missing words and omissions in many places, which makes it look a bit awkward, it is still acceptable. However, there are still a few things I would like to say. One is that the combat power system feels unbalanced. Let's compare Xue Zhong and Qing Yu Nian. From the perspective of realm position alone, Qing Yu Nian's Grandmaster is about equal to the Land Immortal in Snow. However, in actual performance, Land Immortal is just a little bit higher than the Grand Master. It's okay to beat him. Everyone knows that Qing Yu Nian's biggest killing weapon is the big sniper, but the destructive power of Xue Zhong's Land Immortal is comparable to a nuclear bomb. Not to mention there is Da Feng, that one is more outrageous and complicated. If the land gods in the snow can only be regarded as gods, then Da Feng is the real god. He always follows the rules and follows the rules. Qing Yunian would say that the only variable is Wu Zhu, but they are not human anymore and are the products of high-tech bugs. Another problem is the protagonist and the golden finger. Although we know that the protagonist has foresight and knows the direction of the plot and the identity of each character, it still gives people the feeling that he is very stupid and easily surprised. There are also system settings. It is obviously highly bound to the heroine, and you can become stronger by defeating the heroine. However, in the end, you just have no idea in this regard. You spend every day in the palace playing intrigues and plots, otherwise it will bring trouble to the family. The system is almost invisible. If you don't know, you will think you want to play 1v1 pure love. What is the result of this? The protagonist has clearly become a master, but when faced with people of the same level, he was beaten to a pulp, and even took the initiative to reveal his identity as a time traveler. Such a huge advantage can be in the dark, but he has to reveal his trump card and have a time traveler duel. It is quite speechless. It feels like the author really wants to suppress the protagonist's combat power, and it is too deliberate. As for Qing Yunian's fighting power, he was afraid of this and that every day, and the initiative was never in his own hands. Emperor Qing broke out in cold sweat when he was frightened, one memory and one system, double golden fingers, how could he be so frustrated! But considering that the protagonist doesn't do the main line of the system to improve his idiotic thinking, does it seem normal? It's because I put myself in a passive situation. As long as the protagonist can put the main line of the system first, not to mention being invincible, at least he must ensure that he is not like his grandson and has the ability to overturn the table. If he has the strength and trump cards, he can play however he wants. If he wants to continue playing court struggle, then he can hide his strength and continue playing. What should he be afraid of if he has strong trump cards? When Emperor Qing doesn't want to pretend, he can just grab it and refine it instantly. The protagonist is stuck there in the Qing Kingdom, and all the maps in Qing Yu Nian are like this. Considering the combat power of Xuezhong and Dafeng, I doubt that the protagonist will be kicked to death by the roadside if he goes there. The summary is that the plot is very confusing, but the protagonist is very stupid!