A Van That Travels Through Time

The author has written several novels, but I didn't expect his writing skills to be so bad! You can go to another world and there is no time limit, but you don't know that making money depends on system rewards! In the main world, I still rely on selling goods to make a living. I really don't know what to say! It is said that the pig's feet written by Xiaobai are not easy to use! It's not even a cool article. Going to other worlds is as boring as a fast food article!

The style and description of characters and environments in this book are all very well done. What can I say? Appropriate, and then, the appetite is still good, and then I hope that the author can continue to work hard and create greater glory. Then, it is best not to be such a stud, and there are only one or two women, but not too many, too much is not good, and then, it is not good to scold the Queen Mother for being too loyal, and then, the author's first two books are also very good, can recommend 😘😘😘😘😘

The previous book showed that the starting point of the world was not very exciting. Don't develop too quickly in this book. Look at the world of film and television for more than a thousand chapters and you are still an "ordinary person".

It's really outrageous, so weak →_→ →_→→_→

Find someone to break your legs, and then kill a few gangsters, and then you are still happy. You have to help others after drinking, and the bottle is smashed. It is trash. Not to mention the plot is rubbish, and it is also a bit of a virgin bitch. The most disgusting thing is this kind of foreign drama, foreign dog.

Is Wanjie Huobangbang the kind that travels around the world? After the van is bound, you cannot use the van without an invitation or authorization. The safety performance of the van is also very good, right?

I won't fight if I score points. After all, I haven't been poisoned to death. Talk about the author. It doesn't take a day or two for the author to write a book, and there are two books with one to two million words. Talk about this one. First, the beginning is okay, although the writing is not very good and the content is not particularly engaging. Let's talk about the next one, save the little boy, water, no one can argue with it. Every novel, especially if the author is not at the level of a great author, a platinum writer or something. Just take some time to come up with an outline. Don't write half of it. Write half of what you think about. Your theme is to drive a truck and deliver goods to the world, or it can be that the protagonist gradually becomes stronger. The protagonist also has a family, and the first part is written directly, and it is enjoyable. Do you think you are very literary? Very warm? So what it expresses is that the protagonist has relatives and is happy, and there is no other meaning. I understand it in the middle and later stages, and it is normal. Do this directly in the early stage, don't argue, it's just a waste, either there is no outline, or the outline is not detailed enough, and the plot is not connected. I saved the little boy. I don't know what the little boy's name was. I don't know why he fell. I only know that it was an accident. And then you have all the clues about the murder by wire. I can still understand it. Everyone also has this thirst for knowledge about the original situation of the matter, so naturally they want to read more. But it was saved, and then it disappeared. I briefly mentioned that the protagonist was very popular on Douyin, and then he was blocked by reporters. Hospital doctor, come directly to remove the tube? ? ? Is it too outrageous to just remove the tube regardless of whether the protagonist has a physical problem or not? And the hospital's intention is to allow the protagonist to be discharged directly from the hospital, and the discharge procedures have been completed for you? Before this, the protagonist had told the hospital that he wanted to be discharged? The hospital thinks that reporters are troublesome, so it thinks that the protagonist must be afraid of interviews, so it just removes the tube and discharges the protagonist without consent? There is also some kind of female anchor, I want to write about it. Such a great creative beginning, a few chapters alive. You are also a talent. You have written millions of words of novels, and you have made every little mistake. I'm not targeting you, I just hope that I can read more and more novels, so that I won't read those fake rankings every day, either signing in to be invincible, or just this and that, mindlessly following trends, and writing extremely poisonous novels. Finally, the protagonist is the author, the author is the protagonist, you are the same person, don't refute When you create a character for the protagonist, you must think about the problem and plot from the protagonist's point of view. With a great car and a great career, he happily delivers and pulls goods for one or two hundred yuan a time. Do you think this is realistic? You said you just got the system and haven't gotten used to it. That's normal. It's been a long time, a few chapters. Maybe the author wants to say, I naturally thought of it, and I will definitely concentrate on driving to Wanjie to deliver goods later, but you may have forgotten that every novel is not attractive in the early stage, but it dares to be watery, even if it is a small water, it is still water. The early series of "Eagle Eats Chicken" were mediocre, but they were foreshadowing, worldview, and a description of the protagonist's three views. What is this of yours? Chat that has nothing to do with the main plot? A brave act that has nothing to do with the main plot? If you feel that a few thousand words per chapter is a bit too much and you won't be satisfied with the writing if you don't want to chat a few words, then don't write it and think about the plot yourself. Why do so many great authors not update for a day? Some may be lazy, but most of them really can't write because they are not satisfied with what they write, so they delete it. Have you ever deleted it? I think it should be very few. It can be seen between the lines, and the number of words is bluntly stated. If you can listen, just listen. If you can't, just delete it. Whether you can write a novel well or not depends on you.

There are so many realistic dramas. This is the word count of water. Just after getting the system, someone happened to be in trouble and happened to be upstairs. This is really disgusting to me. It is recommended to delete these pictures. Just these few pictures have influenced my viewing.

The protagonist was drinking with someone and had a quarrel, so he asked someone to break the protagonist's legs. It is estimated that there must be too many people who have broken legs. Do you think the police don't exist, or do you want to hack China? If you want to hack China, please use some brains, okay? Don't be so clumsy

Ah, the sea, you have so much water. Author, when you write like this, do you think that we readers are brainless? The protagonist always follows these routines every time he makes a delivery. He just changes the soup without changing the medicine. Is that interesting? Moreover, you have not considered the impact of such an order in people's eyes and the huge sensation caused by it. This is nonsense.