
The Establishment of a Sect in the System
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She can transform ten thousand people into one person, bring ten thousand swords back to her clan, and is known as the Sword Master! He controls all things with one person and unites all things into one. He is called the Puppet Ancestor! He can fight against thousands of immortals by himself, his body has become a saint, and he is known as the God of War! She strokes the harp lightly alone, and when the harp sounds, everyone is extinguished, and she is called the Saint of the Qin! He, who cries at night, makes all things sad, and is known as the Emperor of Love! And he...
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Official(16)Scraped 3d ago
Nonsense
There's too much nonsense, it doesn't even have any technical content, and it doesn't even know how to show off. I can't understand many parts of the writing, and it's not written by a master to foreshadow the rest of the story. It just forces the plot into it.
He doesn't have the magnanimity of the strong seniors at all. . Don't call me senior just yet. . Am I still young? ? Damn, your words exposed you! Do you think the fantasy world is all silly and sweet? How many super disciples have been recruited into one place? What do you think of Chinese cabbage? The protagonists in other novels recruit disciples from one region and one city?
Rubbish
I was given a feather fan in the front, ignored my cultivation, and was injured in the back. Isn't this funny? It's like being stupid. If you don't have enough IQ, don't write it. Don't use your brain
Tell me, if I had your suggestions earlier, would my grades be so bad! But! I still have to admit that my level is really poor! Thank you to those who have always supported me, and to those who have criticized me. Thank you very much!
nice
How come no one reads such a beautiful novel?
It's so rubbish. The main character is not strong. He is paddling every day. I can't understand what is being said at the beginning.
You can talk nonsense for a chapter and a half, that's awesome
So much water, Spelling Code
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Missing Disadvantages:
If you don't want to show off, you must first give the system to the protagonist. The barrier is oppressive. For example, use a terrifying aura to scare your opponent, instead of using 7788's ghost or something as an excuse. In a world of cultivation, what matters is the realm. This is the key point, be more detailed, for example. I had just accepted a disciple and started training when I was still at the lowest level. The protagonist appears out of thin air, and there is no description of shock or surprise at all. That's all. These are my pictures from one to eighteen. I won't read the rest of it. I'll just wait for your new book. Especially when describing the Emperor of War, I need to be a little exaggerated. That's no longer the entrance gate.
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Official(16)Scraped 3d ago
Nonsense
There's too much nonsense, it doesn't even have any technical content, and it doesn't even know how to show off. I can't understand many parts of the writing, and it's not written by a master to foreshadow the rest of the story. It just forces the plot into it.
He doesn't have the magnanimity of the strong seniors at all. . Don't call me senior just yet. . Am I still young? ? Damn, your words exposed you! Do you think the fantasy world is all silly and sweet? How many super disciples have been recruited into one place? What do you think of Chinese cabbage? The protagonists in other novels recruit disciples from one region and one city?
Rubbish
I was given a feather fan in the front, ignored my cultivation, and was injured in the back. Isn't this funny? It's like being stupid. If you don't have enough IQ, don't write it. Don't use your brain
Tell me, if I had your suggestions earlier, would my grades be so bad! But! I still have to admit that my level is really poor! Thank you to those who have always supported me, and to those who have criticized me. Thank you very much!
nice
How come no one reads such a beautiful novel?
It's so rubbish. The main character is not strong. He is paddling every day. I can't understand what is being said at the beginning.
You can talk nonsense for a chapter and a half, that's awesome
So much water, Spelling Code
. . . . . . .
Missing Disadvantages:
If you don't want to show off, you must first give the system to the protagonist. The barrier is oppressive. For example, use a terrifying aura to scare your opponent, instead of using 7788's ghost or something as an excuse. In a world of cultivation, what matters is the realm. This is the key point, be more detailed, for example. I had just accepted a disciple and started training when I was still at the lowest level. The protagonist appears out of thin air, and there is no description of shock or surprise at all. That's all. These are my pictures from one to eighteen. I won't read the rest of it. I'll just wait for your new book. Especially when describing the Emperor of War, I need to be a little exaggerated. That's no longer the entrance gate.
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