Another World Grocery Store

If you have a grocery store and you still need to go to the college, why should you open a grocery store? Just change the title.

. . . . . Damn it, do authors like to torture the main character now? I just want to say how did the main character in this book go smoothly? From the beginning to the end, he was involved in crisis at any time. As a normal novel, it is a bit dangerous, okay, but not like this. I just want to say, when has the main character ever been proud and proud? It has always been an endless cycle of being slapped in the face, slapped in the face, slapped in the face, slapped in the face. I feel tired from reading it.

Five words floated from the sky

I was confused when I saw Chapter 12. I exited and took a look, and there was a big question mark. Isn't this a business novel? The business scope can reach schools. But when I signed up, I really didn't understand. Your products are good. I said you give a few away for free to let a few people know the effect. Then when these people tell their friends, won't the business open up? ? ? Isn't it a snowball? The level of intelligence reduction is a bit too great. You write about school, and there is a boy and a girl. The girl is good-looking. You don't even need to read it to know how to slap her in the face and pretend. You are not mentally retarded to go to the two of them to cause trouble. Do you think the readers believe it or not? Lay a good foundation in the early stage and read more similar novels to learn lessons. Then organize your own thoughts. Is it okay to write?

Good! ! !

The content does not match the name. Although it is okay to read without the name, I can't abandon it, so I won't read it.

When I read Chapter 12, I didn't want to read it. At first, it was said that the protagonist liked to stay at home and didn't go out for several months. Then, after arriving in another world for a few days, he heard about the college's enrollment and ran to become a student. You don't have to read it to guess the content after reading this. If you go to the academy, there will definitely be beautiful tutors, cute female classmates, and there will be a rich second-generation villain who will be jealous of the protagonist. There will be some academy trials later, some auction house will start, and the protagonist will start to show off various things from the grocery store. Is it appropriate for you to run around running a grocery store? Even if you can hire people, the grocery store will become useless. You say that the protagonist in another world wants to become stronger, but is it appropriate for you to rely on other methods? To become stronger, you have to rely on various props in the grocery store! Where is the position of the grocery store? A logistics base? I think the author ended up writing this novel in a bad way. Either it was a mess or it was completely different from the theme. It would be better to just write the grocery store from the beginning and turn it into a system. In the end, the golden finger became useless. When I saw the title and introduction, I thought it was a novel with a new theme, but in the end it was the same routine.

There were so many typos that it took me a long time to understand.

The preface does not match the postscript

Voted. .