It's so Hard to Die

To be honest, I have been chasing it all the way. There was a shortage of books at the beginning [I found the book in the limited-edition promotion at that time] and the beginning of this book is really attractive, and I was hooked [especially at the time I read a comic with chapters that were crazy about my wits←_←]. When I look for books, I usually find them in the limited-edition. Most of them that make me interested in pursuing them after I wake up will continue to pursue them [although most of them did not survive the sleep (￣ー￣)] Back to topic. 1. It's a question of force value [this can be ignored] 2. A map problem! [I'm very confused about this!-_-||] I can still understand the beginning of the book, but when it comes to the force value... It is a complete mess. It feels like the protagonist is constantly jumping to dungeons, and the force value of the dungeon is still random. Now I have actually given up thinking about this aspect. I just need to remember that the protagonist is invincible and the protagonist is awesome. But the map issue cannot be ignored! Every time I change the map, my feeling is "Who am I? Where am I? What am I doing?" The protagonist does not have a God's perspective, but you, the author, do! Can our description of the region be so detailed? Your water is also water every day. Isn't the scenery of water areas fragrant╮()╭ [Every time I change the map, I feel like I'm playing a round where the map drops randomly. I'm trying to win without a map, and I'm running around in the wilderness with confused eyes. 3. Emotional issues [Description] My protagonist has no cp, but I can have a female protagonist. It depends on the situation [although most of them are abandoned by me←_←] emmmm, what should I say? It is up to the author whether the protagonist has a spouse, but now my feelings after reading it make me think of a sentence that is also a meme "Crazy friendship". The third apprentice's feelings for the protagonist... You said this is a story without a female protagonist, well, it doesn't prevent some people from liking the protagonist. Can I think of this as admiration? But to be honest, what I see in the third apprentice's behavior and feelings is possessiveness, not admiration (´-ι_-｀). I feel that if there were not several other apprentices who were also the protagonist, she would want to hack each other to death. The key is that you, the author, are so confused! Unrequited love, secret love, or mutual love are all fine! Please author express your opinion quickly! Even if you don't want the protagonist to know, you can let us readers know! I also want a God's perspective, and it's okay if it's half-open! 4. You have a lot of things to do in your daily life. My updates in the past few days have been just glances at each page. Sometimes I still feel sorry for my book coins, really! After a day of updates, I sometimes wonder what I have read! Is there any plot progress in this update? Even if I I still don't know if this book has a main plot, really! At first, I thought it was about establishing a sect, but later I thought it was about finding the god emperor of the demon sect, Maple?... Forgive me, now I just feel that they are shopping [sometimes it can't be called shopping, people still have a purpose when shopping] Really, please set your goal quickly. Such aimless "wandering" will only consume readers' enthusiasm and favorability. That is, your goal is just to travel, what to eat and drink, can you also write it as a "travel guide" (-ι_- ) 5. The description technique, I think the author's description technique is probably like that in movies and TV shows, but to be honest, such a technique and poor writing style really make the viewer very schizophrenic. Especially when you go back and forth like this several times in a chapter. There are scenes here and there, and my head hurts every time I watch them! Let me give you a suggestion. If you really want to use a similar technique, please write a scene in one or two chapters, and then switch back after finishing it. If you want to express their time relationship, just add a sentence such as "at the same time" and "on the other side". You can also have more words! Ps: That's all for now, I'll add more later if I think of it! ╮( •́Ω•̀ )╭

There must be at least one female protagonist. There must be at least one female protagonist. There must be at least one female protagonist.

This is a very good invincible novel, which can be used by other authors to learn from. What is invincible? This is called invincible, it is true invincibility. The author's writing style is great, and the content is exciting and not boring at all. Some novels are written layer by layer, which is called invincible. In fact, what is the development of your protagonist? Isn't he invincible? Why continue to develop? Why is your level still so low and you need to improve it? , That kind of article cannot be called an invincible article, it should be called a pretentious article, well, it is still the same old-fashioned pretentious article.

Is the protagonist invincible? It doesn't feel like invincibility at all in many places. This is a protagonist in the world of cultivating immortals who is so invincible that he can be hungry, know how to use the toilet, and can't do many things without asking the system.

This is a poisonous point. I just sit there and find it funny, but we are just looking at fools.

Brothers, if you have any questions, you can ask them below this post. Thank you brothers for your support along the way.

If you keep doing this, your book will be useless. It takes two chapters to buy water and three chapters to buy a juicer and a fruit knife. Moreover, it is not funny and the world of high martial arts is not funny. It is a waste of your time and a waste of the time of all of us readers. Invincible should have the style of an invincible. If you don't like the lack of words, you can write some poetic and freehand plots. Don't make them look boring. I know you will delete it if you post it. But I still have to give my opinion.

I think it's good not to have a heroine. I almost gave up the article because of the third disciple several times... Ahem, in short, I can't do anything without a heroine, but don't make it ambiguous and don't make it clear whether that person is the heroine or not...

What's the use of a female protagonist? I hate reading novels with female protagonists. Isn't it a waste of time to write so many words for a female protagonist? The disciple can have someone he likes, but he must not have a female protagonist. Finally, I hope the author can increase the number of words in each chapter.

If the third disciple is not the heroine, I hope it won't be written in such a warm and charming way! I almost can't watch anymore. The male protagonist should not blindly indulge his three disciples. What kind of ghost is the master who is afraid of his own disciples? I almost can't watch it anymore, but I'm still looking forward to the next plot. Come on, I'll always support you♥