A Layman in the Courtyard

Even worse than the first one, I'm speechless. Licking everywhere, is it interesting? Interesting?

I just went back to Beijing to live in a courtyard and had a fight. I was away from home. There are Hong Kong people in the system space. I want to make money and go back after reform and opening up.

Let's create this kind of setting. This kind of people should die as soon as possible. Is it disgusting to live? Your parents paid hundreds of thousands for you to study and grow up, and they also spent hundreds of thousands to buy a house, and you still owe hundreds of thousands. You, a normal person, can't do this... And you still wear a nylon, giving people the impression that you are trash, and you only rely on cheating and adultery.

Very good, have the ability not to act randomly, have feelings but not bad feelings, have feelings, serve the country and the people, and be transparent!

The living environment of Qin Huairu's era... Created such a woman. She is not a great woman, she can even be said to be a bad woman. But she also really takes care of the Jia family. If you want to marry her, that's fine, but you can't just break up the relationship and get married there. You are not happy for yourself. Take a break for a few months before getting married. Your family doesn't want to get married without marrying someone else. But what is the author thinking, affected by the Xu Damao and Qin Jingru incident? Identity issues, there are so many entanglements in one identity issue. There are always problems. No matter what era you do, you will never end well. The more lies you tell, the harder it will be to keep them true. Regarding neighborhood issues, I don't know if the author's emotional intelligence is insufficient or what, but the writing is also messy.

I just came here and the house was completely stolen. I didn't say a word. I donated money whenever I disagreed.

It's only been ten chapters and it's already starting to disgust me! Are you having trouble with the widow? Whiten the little green tea Qin Huairu! It's disgusting!

Two worlds, the real world has parents, daughters, whatever. . I have been in the courtyard world for so long and am so awesome. I don't want it anymore in the main world. I'm a white-eyed wolf. It's disgusting.

Whether the plot is exciting or not may be a matter of ability, I'll leave that to you, but we must be logical, otherwise your worldview will not be able to stand. For example, the protagonist is as crazy as losing his mind, so why must he marry Qin Huairu? ? He does not activate system conditions, nor is he a system task, nor is he a sign-in task. He does not have the necessary requirements. It feels like he has traveled to the world of Qingmansiheyuan, so he must have a heroine. Isn't this baffling? Moreover, before the protagonist traveled through time, his wife left with her two-year-old daughter because she lost her job and had to pay off her mortgage. After the protagonist got a double door, he analyzed himself. He wanted to collect resources in the 1950s and sell them in modern society to enhance his economic strength. However, within a few days, the resources were no longer collected. You can't control your crotch first. The key is that you still have a two-year-old daughter? You shouldn't seize the time to develop resources and make money, okay? Can you take your daughter back? This is not something that a sane protagonist can do. How do you let readers take the role? ?

The male protagonist's three views cannot be established, and the more he watches, the less interested he becomes.