Rise of the Mortal Family

I seriously doubt the author is gay. The words "patted the bandit's buttocks" were written. The key is that the third thief is a tough guy.

The punctuation is wrong, and he has a relationship with Han Li. He is a brother-in-law. Goodbye. The main thing is not to steal the heroine. Zi Ling is the most beautiful woman.

I can't stand it anymore, it's too poisonous, showing off wealth and talent, this is courting death! What's more, in the world of immortality (including the world of cultivation), it is a world more cruel than the laws of the jungle and the law of the jungle on earth.

Can authors of QQ reading bonus coins receive rice?

Author, please rewrite it, or make major changes to the previous chapters, otherwise I really can't stand it.

It's such an imbecile novel. If I tell others that I have it but I can't take it away, in the next episode I will be brainwashed by powerful people to copy heavenly materials and earthly treasures every day. For such an imbecile novel, I still have the nerve to write about a mortal cultivating immortality.

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. I was so fucking speechless.

I want to write it down quickly

The plot is okay, but the writing is too poor in many places, which is very awkward.

I have read more than a hundred of them, and generally speaking they are pretty good. The plot is smooth and smooth, and the thinking and logic are simple and logical. But later on, it became more and more like, um, foundation building in half a year, Nascent Soul in one year, and invincibility in three years. .