Hogwarts: My Grandmother Was the Queen

Now when I read novels with European and American backgrounds, I always think that they like to eat children.

At the beginning, a system that was loaded to 99% was mentioned, but after reading Chapter 22, the word system only appeared once. It was always talking about the protagonist's prominent status as a British royal family, but there was no mention of magic ability. Later, the element of magic was never fully reflected. It has been told that the protagonist, as the royal family, wants to attract talents from the magical world, which is more in line with the theme. But as a Harry Potter fanfic, it doesn't feel very good.

The writing is very good, not so much bitterness and hatred. This is how Harry Potter should be. It was originally written for children to satisfy their curiosity.

In fact, just looking at the writing style, plot structure ability and fluency, they are all very good, and there are basically no logical points or awkward plots written for the sake of conflict, so it can definitely be given 5 stars. But the problem is that the subject chosen by the author is a Harry Potter fan, and magic is good everywhere. It is very different from other magic subjects. It does not focus on destructive power or magnificent magical phenomena, but integrates it into life and becomes a magical world where everything comes true. Even in other magical worldviews, the magic of time, space, transformation, death, etc., Which belongs to the authority of a few powerful people or "gods", can be learned by most people. Therefore, according to the current writing method of the author, which focuses on tactics, the establishment of magic forces from scratch, and the chain of interpersonal relationships, etc., It may not be possible for those of us who like to read HP fandoms to get the kind of ideas that we like, because the author basically has no description of magic. After more than 60 chapters, there is basically no exploration and thinking on the magic side. All in all, it is a good book for people who like to be Machiavellian and want to think with their own brains. Personally, I think the author's writing style is more suitable for the magical world of Middle-earth such as Game of Thrones or The Lord of the Rings rather than Harry Potter.

It's an unexpected route. It's good. Who is the heroine going to choose? It's unrealistic for the royal family to not have a heroine.

Isn't there a hair growth spell to cure baldness? There is a little wizard in the group who knows this! Is this a housekeeping magic or a minor hex?

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Since it was put on the shelves, it has been updated with almost 10,000 words every day. It is very fast and must be praised. In addition, the protagonist's identity is positioned as the Queen's eldest grandson and heir to the British royal family. The interaction between this identity and some characters in the original work is exciting. The disadvantage is that in order to catch up with the update after it was put on the shelves, some content was copied from the original text without correcting it, resulting in contextual inconsistencies. In addition, there are some repetitive descriptions for the sake of word count. In addition, the system writes and forgets, forgets and writes again, and the sense of existence is thin.

Rather than political pull, especially the politics of barbarians in Europe, without the great power of one body, everything else is in vain.