Was Eliminated from the Opening Draft

Was Eliminated from the Opening Draft

by Tomb

Length:
619Kwords302chapters
Latest:
Ch. 302怀孕了?
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Updated 4y agoScraped 15d ago
10Comments
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6Fans
0QD Score

About This Novel

When I opened my eyes drowsily, the first thing I heard was that I was eliminated. Please prepare for your farewell stage performance! Lin Ning expressed that he was very confused, what is the situation, where is this, who am I?

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Official(10)Scraped 13d ago

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─╄0vë囗'shang ㄋ56mo ago

No wonder no one is watching

My sister and two classmates were molested! You can still tolerate being provoked. Just bear with it slowly. Bye.

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Walking Through the Sun and Moon, Picking up Stars, There is No Self in the World54mo ago

I was successfully persuaded to quit. The author, you are really too ungrateful. I can't stand it. So I'm leaving! ! !

I was successfully persuaded to quit. The author, you are really too ungrateful. I can't stand it. So I'm leaving! ! !

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Han Bing_ad52mo ago

Am I the only one who noticed the system flow written in the title bar of the novel? Where is the system? I looked at dozens of pictures but didn't see any system.

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Han Bing_ad52mo ago

Am I the only one who noticed the system flow written in the title bar of the novel? Where is the system? I looked at dozens of pictures but didn't see any system.

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Panic Panic48mo ago

Unremarkable

The writing is fluent, not refreshing enough, has no new ideas, and is so bland that I have no desire to read on.

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Aibieli53mo ago

You'd better endure it slowly. Goodbye. No wonder no one is watching.

You'd better endure it slowly. Goodbye. No wonder no one is watching.

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Rest Before What?54mo ago

The heroine problem

Either you have a harem, I really am

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Just Be Happy55mo ago

After reading the update. But the male protagonist is too weak. Let anyone slander?????????????????????

JU
Just Be Happy55mo ago

After reading the update. But the male protagonist is too weak. Let anyone slander?????????????????????

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Qingyan Yase53mo ago

More than two hundred photos! More than 400,000 words. There are more than a hundred books. The results are still so bad. Author, give it up

Seriously, you are not suitable for writing. You cannot capture the reader's g-spot, the writing is not good, and the plot is not innovative. It can be said to be a fighter among the garbage.

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