
Douluo is Reborn as Wuhundianyan
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Reborn as Wuhundian Yan, in this life, he stepped on Tang San, became a god, and helped Wuhundian complete its great cause.
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Official(3)Scraped 5d ago
The timeline is so confusing! Has the author never read the original work?
Super recommended, lots of support, support, support
Author, your writing skills are fine and your writing is clear and concise. But don't randomly change the original characters. Adding random settings will make you uncomfortable. You are a second design, and you have to change it from the original work. That Ye Lingling was against the Wuhun Palace, and Hu Liena didn't see Yan as a licker. Dou Yi has no concept of ultimate attributes. Even a martial spirit with ultimate attributes can only have one ultimate attribute. Because the human body cannot bear it, no mortal creature can carry two ultimate attributes. Even Ditian, the son of the Black and White Dragon King, only has one ultimate attribute. Also, Yan didn't know Qian Renxue at all, and he didn't know the grudge between their mother and son. Qian Renxue's existence was a secret, and he inherited the divine throne after the Tiandou Palace changed. If he appears again, he will be a god. Also, Xie Yue's father was trained by Bibi Dong, which is outrageous. Bibi Dong didn't care about this at all when she was a saint. She has been under house arrest since the Yu Xiaogang incident. After Bibi Dong killed Qian Xunji, Hu Liena awakened her martial soul at the age of six and was accepted as a disciple. Moreover, the golden generations are of different ages, so how can they awaken at the same time? Finally, a six-year-old soul master is not something that alarms the Wuhun Palace. As long as his innate soul power is at level seven, he can do it.
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Official(3)Scraped 5d ago
The timeline is so confusing! Has the author never read the original work?
Super recommended, lots of support, support, support
Author, your writing skills are fine and your writing is clear and concise. But don't randomly change the original characters. Adding random settings will make you uncomfortable. You are a second design, and you have to change it from the original work. That Ye Lingling was against the Wuhun Palace, and Hu Liena didn't see Yan as a licker. Dou Yi has no concept of ultimate attributes. Even a martial spirit with ultimate attributes can only have one ultimate attribute. Because the human body cannot bear it, no mortal creature can carry two ultimate attributes. Even Ditian, the son of the Black and White Dragon King, only has one ultimate attribute. Also, Yan didn't know Qian Renxue at all, and he didn't know the grudge between their mother and son. Qian Renxue's existence was a secret, and he inherited the divine throne after the Tiandou Palace changed. If he appears again, he will be a god. Also, Xie Yue's father was trained by Bibi Dong, which is outrageous. Bibi Dong didn't care about this at all when she was a saint. She has been under house arrest since the Yu Xiaogang incident. After Bibi Dong killed Qian Xunji, Hu Liena awakened her martial soul at the age of six and was accepted as a disciple. Moreover, the golden generations are of different ages, so how can they awaken at the same time? Finally, a six-year-old soul master is not something that alarms the Wuhun Palace. As long as his innate soul power is at level seven, he can do it.









