Douluo: to Become a God, it All Depends on the Enemy!

There are problems in many places. The character design of the protagonist is even more disgusting than that of Tang San in the original work. The author describes that when the protagonist encounters an incident, the teacher of Shrek Academy subconsciously protects the protagonist. However, the protagonist keeps trying to provoke the teachers to make them malicious towards him, and then turns them into scapegoats for his evil practice. If you want to mess with them, just write bad things about them. You are a pure white-eyed wolf who targets people who defend themselves. (The chapters after going to Shrek and the soul hunting chapter) Let's talk about the few that stand out. It's another brainless story in the beginning where he insists on getting under Tang Hao's nose to mess with Xiao Wu. While telling himself that Tang Hao should keep a low profile in the dark, he messes with Tang San, picks up rabbits, and sbs. (The opening chapters of Notting College) Duke Long is a Contra, and Contra and above can reveal Xiao Wu's identity. Therefore, when it is written that when Duke Long was with Shrek, was he blind to Contra and did not discover Xiao Wu's identity? (After going to Shrek, go hunting for souls with the group for a few chapters) Some parts are very strange. I read the comments and said they were copied, but they haven't been corrected yet. I don't know whether it's true or not. (Look further, it's in the comments)

The Tang trio were just pulled out by the Shura God. Otherwise, they could only rely on the Douluo plane to have the ability. The Douluo Tiandao could only move the Blood Mirror Peak. Do you really think that the human world and the tunnel are just for you? Except for the Douluo and the garbage plane, everything else is the projection of the prehistoric and perfect world that covers the sky. Do you really think that they are a trap? The world's will, the correct one is Douluo. The planet is rebelling against Tang Buddha. The luck of Wuhun Temple was transferred to Tang San by Shura God. It was Shura who did Tang San's journey to Douluo Continent. He chose Huo Yuhao's luck. The Tang Sect fell. Use Tang Ya to join the Tang Sect and divide the luck. The Tang Sect harvested Huo Yuhao's luck and obtained the luck of the Star Dou Forest. I was convinced.

Everyone in Holy Soul Village + Old Jack can be regarded as the benefactors of the protagonist. The incident at the gate of Notting College proves that the protagonist is really a white-eyed wolf. He watched Old Jack being bullied by the guard. The protagonist only did two things, 1: thinking about himself (indecisive and selfish), 2: secretly criticizing Tang San (complaining in his heart) , the protagonist is right to criticize Tang San, Tang San is indeed like this, and it is also true that the protagonist does not help his benefactor (Old Jack). A white-eyed wolf criticizes a villain, it makes me laugh to death just thinking about it. The author should reflect on the Notting College janitor incident. Is it really good to write an indecisive white-eyed wolf protagonist? ? ?

You copied someone else's original text and you can't delete it cleanly. You have no professionalism at all😅😅😅😅😅😅

What Gouba novel? I'm already a member, but they still ask me to act as if I write well, that's okay. The writing is the same as Gouba, ouch.

If it weren't for the Wuhun Palace to become other casual people, Bibi Dong would be the same. Without the training of the Wuhun Palace and the awakening of the martial soul, she would only be worthy of being reduced to the plaything of the nobles. All the resources were invested in it. She was still a leftover female saint and ran away. If Qianxunji hadn't saved her, she would have become a toy. Although Qianxunji didn't save her, she would have become a toy. What Xunji did was wrong, but he did what he was supposed to do, and he went a little too far. If not, he was abducted by a waste, and his love brain is still mentally ill, so he couldn't accept it when he was raped? If it weren't for Wuhundian, Bibi Dong would be lined up in a corner of the basement.

Isn't this just a random copy? All these nonsensical names were randomly thrown around. Zhao Wuji led a team when he went out, and then met Meng Shu on the way. Ye Lingling and Qin Ming suddenly appeared in the team, and a bunch of people who had never appeared in this timeline appeared.

You were wrong in saying that Qian Xunji's only fault was being too merciful. If you bring it into Qian Xunji's perspective, you will find that there is no difference between Bibi Dong and a traitor. How did you treat traitors before? Having a child is nothing compared to torture? In addition, look for the fairy grass medicine catalog and illustrated book. There are others in Juhua Pass that are not found in the Tang Sect. The antidote to the poison of the spirit-closing snake, I will tell you mine, it depends on others, the herb fairy grass purifies the martial soul, the soul ring evolves, the poisonous erysipelas strain is condensed into the soul core, and the author is great, the protagonist can not be too wasteful The practice system of Douluo Continent is wrong. The ninth test of Poseidon to cleanse the soul is to cleanse the soul of Boza in the soul ring. I read this novel. It is said that it is written in Douluo fandom or it is the Douluo floor tiles deliberately created by the Parasite God Realm. There is also an author's book that the author can learn a lot from, and the system of not many authors (selected Ancient Throne) can also learn from it.

Picking up rabbits is a bit stupid. Rabbits and Sanshui are bound, right? The reason why the rabbit is close to Sanshui is because Sanshui has half of the blood of the soul beast, and the blue silver grass itself is the food of the rabbit. Why do you pig feet? ? ? Moreover, there is Tang Dachui always watching behind Sanshui. Rabbit and Sanshui have no feelings, so Tang Dachui has already taken action, right? Nowadays, people who write fan fiction are basically mindless.

Run away! ! ! Run away, it's poisonous! ! ! ! ! ! ! Run away! ! ! Run away, it's poisonous! ! ! ! ! ! !