Elf: Angler's Rainy Team

The character of this protagonist is too weak. When something happens, he is too frightened to move, even once or twice. Later, when encountering threats of the same level, he is still too frightened to move. Then there is the mythical beast feather. It was said to be a trump card at the beginning. If you can use it, don't use it. But later on, you really don't need it, just waiting to die, Bi Diao When he came, he was so scared that his legs were weak, and he said that he looked like a eagle. How could such a weak trainer cultivate a strong elf that could suffer hardships and embarrass the protagonist? But the protagonist has experienced so many things and killed people, and his psychological quality is still so poor. Then what will be used to transform the protagonist in the future? Are all pets dead? People say character arcs, your protagonist is an unchanging straight line, and whatever he goes through has nothing to do with him. I get angry just thinking about it, and when something happens, I am so scared that I dare not move, my legs become weak, and I cry for help. The scene with the megalodon in the front is even more funny. I am so scared that I dare not move a second, and then I hide behind the elf and calmly command in an instant. Your protagonist must have this kind of psychological quality. You can still be scared and dare not move in the front. If you are convinced, you will be happy, and then you will switch abruptly. I have to spend money to watch you enjoy yourself. It is a very good book. Can you describe the characters a little bit?

The first 150 chapters are pretty good, so I read them for free. But by Chapter 200, the plot becomes boring after leaving the wilderness survival and coming to human society. The club has small fights, and the underworld feels like a gang fight. (Personally, I don't think the audience for Pokémon novels has much overlap with this kind of plot.) It would be okay to go for a dark novel, but the protagonist and the author are both flat, so it's difficult to get through it. From my personal opinion, it is a good choice to turn it into a travel novel after surviving in the wilderness. The character of the protagonist is mature and can be seen as a mess. After all, traveling is much better than pretending to be slapped in the face during a gang fight in a club. I am the first to land on the island plot point of human society after finishing Wilderness Survival with a free subscription. Xiao Nai's series of plots were bland and had no attraction, so he was directly 'scared' away.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I found that the author is really good at using water characters. At the beginning, he used water characters. Fortunately, he changed it later and it didn't have much water. But there were a lot of words about accounting and daily trivial things, but the author's writing is not bad. You can continue to read. I just want to use less water characters and more interesting plots.

It's not that I don't understand the benefits of joining the alliance. This book is realistic. But in fact, the protagonist is already darker. Not a good guy, not completely bad either. The Pokemon characters who join Team Rocket, such as a certain Bug Master, are very nice and dark. It took me a long time to rob the fat man and donate the dirty money to the orphanage. It was too strenuous for me, a person who likes to show off. Wouldn't Team Rocket do it too? It's not like being a Team Rocket means being a wanted criminal on the Internet, otherwise how would the three Musashi dare to wander on the street. Being a Rocket doesn't mean that you can't go to the league's hospitals, and I don't believe that the Rockets themselves don't have benefits or other benefits to recruit people. This part is really about quitting. I still like the protagonist's words: If this league is really that shit, just go to the Rockets. There are so many restrictions on joining an alliance, and the protagonist is a gangster, so why bother?

There is more than one heir to the gym leader. Why would the Orange Islands save people when they have made friends with Daigo? One more thing is worse than one less thing. How can the friendship between the heirs of the gym leader be better than that of the Hoenn Champion? I can't figure it out.

The only thing that is unacceptable is eating its own kind in front of a conquered elf. It feels like killing someone. Isn't there Kentaro steak in anime? It seems that the green caterpillars are edible, and the green onion duck was almost eaten to extinction. If you can't accept eating Pokémon, then tell me are there real ordinary animals and plants in the Pokémon world? Do everyone eat synthetic meat? Is there such a setting?

Food needs to be chewed slowly, and good books need to be savored carefully! ① For some book friends: This novel reflects part of the real society. In this society, adults who have been polished will not roll over. In your own book, say a few words, what happened? You don't have to agree, but please don't say bad things! ②For me: There is a section of the author's dream interpretation in the book that impressed me deeply. It seemed that I saw myself and felt the same. I don't know if it was Zhuang Zhou dreaming of a butterfly, or a butterfly dreaming of Zhuang Zhou! ③To the author: It is not easy to open a book, nor is it easy to seal the box. It has been more than two and a half years, and I hope it will have a beginning and an end, which comforts my heart.

The Rainy Day Team revolves around the rainy weather and uses its characteristics. The elves in the protagonist's team are a bit different from the Rainy Day Team I played.

It was okay at first, but as I wrote it, it became (saying it like this, thinking about it like this, returning to it like this, so-and-so...) You know how to count words. Even though I don't have obsessive-compulsive disorder, I felt uncomfortable all over.

The content and writing style are good, and the plot is quite full, and even has a sense of immersion. However, in the fast food era, a book can only contain hundreds of pages. You are over 50 and have not evolved yet. How many do you want to write?