Martial Spirit Strengthening Furnace, Charging to Strengthen Blue Silver Grass at the Beginning
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[Douluo comic version character design] Traveling through the world of Douluo, Qin Yi awakens the "Enhancement Furnace" martial soul, has a natural soul power of level 1, and will never be able to break through the soul master in his life? Fortunately, the "Enhancement Furnace" can not only strengthen the martial soul and promote the evolution of the martial soul, but also strengthen the soul ring and increase the life of the soul ring! What, you said you want to strengthen your martial soul? It's easy to say that strengthening level 1 soul power once does not guarantee success! And everything started when Qin Yi helped the non-chief Tang San to fail three times in a row to strengthen the useless martial spirit "Blue Silver Grass"...
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Official(77)Scraped 2mo ago
The first person to give up a forest for a tree, why bother looking for the Jade Little Anal Strengthening Furnace to strengthen the upgrade and evolve? You still want to go on defense? You are 12 years old and six years old. If you go to the Spirit Hall, you are not the so-called Soul Master to base the Soul Saint. There is also half-level soul power. This thing, half-level Soul Master is not the same as a great Soul Master (Soul Master 10 Soul Master 100 Great Soul Master 1000) ) If someone gives you 100 and gets 50 at checkout, it becomes 0.5. You can only forget about the same level. However, a subject that can cross levels well is written like shit by you. I have read thousands of novels and this is the first one I reviewed.
The protagonist's IQ is too low
He said that he was afraid of exposing the strengthening furnace and being taken away. Then what? Just let this little brat Tang San strengthen his martial spirit without fear of being caught? Don't you know that this little rat Tang Hao is a sect slave? If you are exposed in front of him, there is a 100% chance that you will be caught and locked up by the Haotian Sect, and your sect will only be strengthened.
It looks good so far, and the type setting is quite innovative, but there are three poisonous points that the author should pay attention to. 1. Fighting against a mistress is actually okay, it's just a double standard, it's normal! As long as you can be sure to accept him as your little brother, it doesn't matter if you get close. 2. Don't get close to Yu Xiaogang. Not one of a hundred people may like this character. 3. You don't have to accept it, but please remove the original CP (relatively speaking, more people will accept it) Just a suggestion, don't take it seriously
The idiot protagonist, without Yu Xiaogang, Tang San just wants to improve faster, and it turns out that he will also improve faster, so he insists on being a burden.
It can only be said that these two stars are for this good martial soul setting, but the content is really not good. Tang San's first soul skill is still his mother's entanglement. It can't be written apart from the original work.
If you fail to help Tang San strengthen, then you are not allowed to die.
Because your setting is novel, I give you three stars. First of all: this book is written based on the Tang San series (I personally like self-development, and don't even care about the plot where Tang San is the protagonist of the original work.), And it also writes about the protagonist's contact with women (Xiao Wu), which is really nc. Secondly: the protagonist's martial spirit! I personally think it is best to write it as one that adds attributes! Such as the five elements. In Chapter 18, the author wanted to write that the protagonist's martial soul can increase his soul ring (that's how it should be), but I personally think this is not good. Writing something that can add attributes would be outrageous.
The martial spirit setting is strong but you can only rely on others like Qibao Liuli. You tell others everything when you come up. Once this heaven-defying martial spirit is exposed and you have no ability to protect yourself, you will be a proper tool. You will be locked up and lay eggs like a hen. Even Tang San's Kung Fu was only announced after becoming a god. It is also a castrated version. What do you think will happen to someone who has directly changed your nature?
Even if the common man is not guilty, he is still guilty of carrying the jade.
I don't know, martial arts spirits that can strengthen martial arts tend to attract people's attention. (For example, Jiuxin Haitang Wuhun was suppressed by the same auxiliary system because it was too heaven-defying, not to mention that the protagonist is an enhanced Wuhun.) The trees that are beautiful in the forest will be destroyed by the wind. In the early stage, they should hide their clumsiness and develop secretly, and in the middle and late stages, they should use their strength to build a force or form a family force. (No matter which world the Chinese go to, they must take root in that world and leave something behind.)
From what I can see so far, the Tang San written by the author seems to be a comic version.
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Official(77)Scraped 2mo ago
The first person to give up a forest for a tree, why bother looking for the Jade Little Anal Strengthening Furnace to strengthen the upgrade and evolve? You still want to go on defense? You are 12 years old and six years old. If you go to the Spirit Hall, you are not the so-called Soul Master to base the Soul Saint. There is also half-level soul power. This thing, half-level Soul Master is not the same as a great Soul Master (Soul Master 10 Soul Master 100 Great Soul Master 1000) ) If someone gives you 100 and gets 50 at checkout, it becomes 0.5. You can only forget about the same level. However, a subject that can cross levels well is written like shit by you. I have read thousands of novels and this is the first one I reviewed.
The protagonist's IQ is too low
He said that he was afraid of exposing the strengthening furnace and being taken away. Then what? Just let this little brat Tang San strengthen his martial spirit without fear of being caught? Don't you know that this little rat Tang Hao is a sect slave? If you are exposed in front of him, there is a 100% chance that you will be caught and locked up by the Haotian Sect, and your sect will only be strengthened.
It looks good so far, and the type setting is quite innovative, but there are three poisonous points that the author should pay attention to. 1. Fighting against a mistress is actually okay, it's just a double standard, it's normal! As long as you can be sure to accept him as your little brother, it doesn't matter if you get close. 2. Don't get close to Yu Xiaogang. Not one of a hundred people may like this character. 3. You don't have to accept it, but please remove the original CP (relatively speaking, more people will accept it) Just a suggestion, don't take it seriously
The idiot protagonist, without Yu Xiaogang, Tang San just wants to improve faster, and it turns out that he will also improve faster, so he insists on being a burden.
It can only be said that these two stars are for this good martial soul setting, but the content is really not good. Tang San's first soul skill is still his mother's entanglement. It can't be written apart from the original work.
If you fail to help Tang San strengthen, then you are not allowed to die.
Because your setting is novel, I give you three stars. First of all: this book is written based on the Tang San series (I personally like self-development, and don't even care about the plot where Tang San is the protagonist of the original work.), And it also writes about the protagonist's contact with women (Xiao Wu), which is really nc. Secondly: the protagonist's martial spirit! I personally think it is best to write it as one that adds attributes! Such as the five elements. In Chapter 18, the author wanted to write that the protagonist's martial soul can increase his soul ring (that's how it should be), but I personally think this is not good. Writing something that can add attributes would be outrageous.
The martial spirit setting is strong but you can only rely on others like Qibao Liuli. You tell others everything when you come up. Once this heaven-defying martial spirit is exposed and you have no ability to protect yourself, you will be a proper tool. You will be locked up and lay eggs like a hen. Even Tang San's Kung Fu was only announced after becoming a god. It is also a castrated version. What do you think will happen to someone who has directly changed your nature?
Even if the common man is not guilty, he is still guilty of carrying the jade.
I don't know, martial arts spirits that can strengthen martial arts tend to attract people's attention. (For example, Jiuxin Haitang Wuhun was suppressed by the same auxiliary system because it was too heaven-defying, not to mention that the protagonist is an enhanced Wuhun.) The trees that are beautiful in the forest will be destroyed by the wind. In the early stage, they should hide their clumsiness and develop secretly, and in the middle and late stages, they should use their strength to build a force or form a family force. (No matter which world the Chinese go to, they must take root in that world and leave something behind.)
From what I can see so far, the Tang San written by the author seems to be a comic version.
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