A Certain Scientific Time Control

The electric light dancing on your fingertips is my eternal faith in this life.  I feel that there are very few fans of Super Cannon and Magic Forbidden, so don't stop updating or stop immediately. If you continue to work hard, you will definitely achieve something, so keep working hard. 🤡🤡🤡 It has potential, please give it a try, author! You can consider adding more updates and signing a contract in the future! 😘😘😘Let me count your votes and encourage you! (No more for today, we'll talk about it tomorrow...) I'd better ask book friends to vote for this author. After writing so much, I only got a few votes. Forget it, dad will encourage you and Xizhilang. (I declare that I am not the author Gu Lai's trust. I just want the author to stop being a eunuch and give me some encouragement. After all, there are very few super gun and magic forbidden fans) [The last picture was accidentally discovered by me on station B, not bad!

The quality of the writing is very good. Most of the heroines of the Demon Forbidden fanfic are either Misaka or harems. There are too few articles with single heroines and analysis. The articles in the book do not conflict with the original Demon Forbidden text at all. They are original and do not deviate from the main plot. The protagonist's ability does not become invincible all at once, and the emotional line is developed bit by bit. The emotional line is also very good. The relationship with the female protagonist Shokuhou also develops slowly. It is not like the kind of mindless and cool novels where you blush when you see the male protagonist and then fall in love with him. The male protagonist's life experience is not the kind of fatherless or motherless or the kind of rich and house, otherwise it is not written at all. The book explains why the male protagonist came back to Academy City, and the kind of story the male protagonist has in each other again and again. The first time I escaped from the human body laboratory, I was numb and dark, and I was distrustful and wary of everything. It was not until I met the female protagonist Shokuhou that I slowly unblocked my heart. Apart from Shokuhou, the male protagonist only has the "Seven Nights" who have accompanied him until now to give him a sense of security. Therefore, the protagonist Yiye will still carry his knife with him until he is with Shokuhou. The male protagonist was a little confused when he learned that he was an angel, because he felt that he was a monster in human skin, with resilience that did not belong to humans and a body that could transform into an angel. Like Accelerator, he could not find a reason to stay with the person he wanted to protect. It was not until the end of the Old Testament that the male protagonist finally found the reason why he stayed with the female protagonist to protect her since he was a monster. When I went to meet the parents later, I also confessed that their parents were friends and that the male and female protagonists first met when they were children. The male protagonist awakened his abilities when he was not seven but two. The changes in the female protagonist's eyes and abilities and why she was sent to Academy City were due to the influence of the male protagonist's abilities. The death of the male protagonist's parents was not an accident but an obliteration. In the end, the male protagonist also resolved the knots he had felt for many years and his abilities were restored. I have only read the last part of this book and I don't know. My Chinese skills are very poor and my writing is not very good (please don't criticize me if you can't understand it👿👿). Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and make more updates😷

The overall quality of this book is high. There are 1.08 Million words in 169 chapters. This is also a very proud achievement among fan fiction. I spent about three nights reading it. Here are my feelings. 1. The author's writing style is extremely delicate, showing almost all the details that I, a novelist, can notice. In the original plot, Misaka Mikoto was baptized by Kihara Gensei and became close to level.6. The plot of Kamijou Touma's rescue was changed to a male character. The main Togami was saved by the heroine Shokuhou Fuqi one night after more than half a year in the memory. That chapter has a lot of foreshadowing and is all connected together. It is difficult to imagine that this is a new writer. Here, I am also grateful that there is such an excellent fanfic in the Demon Forbidden City. 2. Emotional drama, the whole text is not ntr. Although there are some plots that make people feel that there is the development of emotional branches, they are all cut off in time. The female protagonist is the fifth level.5 Of the original work, Shokuhou Misaki, and the male protagonist is the author's original lev el.5, Ten Gods One Night, there is no scene of the male protagonist falling in love at first sight, but it describes the beautiful love story of childhood sweethearts, like "Aoyama Gosho". I personally feel that it is very good, and it does not destroy the emotional line of the original work at all and even pushes it. This is also a good review 3. Character characterization. The author has also put a lot of effort into character characterization, which is almost perfectly close to the original character. The character deviations made based on this novel can be said to make people feel that there is no OOC, giving readers a smooth mind, instead of everything being wrong. 4. The description of the plot line. The author can be said to be completely consistent with the original work in terms of the plot line and integrate the protagonist. Although this aspect is not too novel, it can still be seen the author's hardship. After all, this kind of thing is still very troublesome. It must not only satisfy the original story to not collapse, but also add the plot of the original protagonist. It can be said that the effort is very great. 5. A little personal suggestion: Although the above advantages make me personally and probably most readers happy, I hope to make some comments to the author. ①: Some of the plots are too rushed. I don't know whether it is because they want to capture a lot of things that happened in the original work in a few months or because there are too many words to consider both front and back. However, it is good to have no logical deviation in the whole text. ②: The author omits some parts and I hope to use '...' Instead of blunt'. . ', After all, this already makes people feel a little uncomfortable. Maybe because I have been reading novels, I rarely encounter such omissions. I also hope that everyone will pay attention to this excellent forbidden humanistic novel. Novel fans can easily read it, and anime fans can also use this book to supplement their understanding of parts of the original work. The author has really put a lot of effort into it. I personally did not notice the details when reading the original work. Almost all the outlines are included here.

This book is one of the top three among all the super gun and magic forbidden series that I have read. I hope the author can stick to it. Originally, there were very few super cannon fans, and almost all of them had Mikoto as the heroine. Although I personally like Mikoto, too many of them would make me tired. Other works that really stood out to me were basically thrown into disarray. So I very much hope that the author can stick to it and I will become your first loyal reader. 6 Daily recommendation votes are given, which is also my optimism and "investment" in this work. When this book becomes a big hit in the future, please don't forget me~ Finally, let me make a small suggestion. Slow down the pace a little and describe more of the daily interactions with Xiaoqi. After all, the plot of Super Cannon II has been completed in less than 100 chapters, which is really fast. It's a good thing that the plot is compact, but I don't want it to end so quickly. To sum up, author bacteria, come on!

I didn't feel it at first, but when I looked at the name of the protagonist, a sentence came to my mind: Man✧*｡٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*｡

Wasn't there just a few dozen chapters before? Or I've raised it for too long🤐

Come on, author. It's very fun to watch

Come on, come on, bookworms of this book gather here

Post some photos of Queen Shokuhou

This is the first time I have read a book about the forbidden world, and it has been written for so long. I support the author😘