Douluo: I Picked up Dugu Bo at the Beginning!

Chapter 11, Dugu Yan only reached level 20 when he was 13 years old. Are you telling me that he is an innate level 7 person? Zhu Zhuqing was born at Level 7, and she was already Level 27 at the age of 11 and a half. Even if she worked harder, she wouldn't be so far behind, right? In terms of resources for enjoyment, Dugu Yan is definitely richer than Zhu Zhuqing. I have an upgrade situation here for the author to refer to. Innate full soul power Level 10~20, upgrade one level every three months, slow down for one month for every level 10, and search for soul rings for one month each time. Level 11 for 6 years and one month, Level 21 for 8 years and 5 months, Level 31 for 11 years and 6 months, Level 41 for 15 years and 4 months, Level 51 for 19 years and 11 months... [Innate Level 9 Soul Power] From level 10 to level 20, one level will be upgraded every three and a half months. Subsequently, the level will be slowed down by one month for every level 10, and one month will be spent searching for soul rings each time. 6 Years and 3 months old at level 11, 8 years and 11.5 Months at level 21, 12 years and 5 months at level 31, 16 years and 7.5 Months at level 41, 21 years and 7 months at level 51... [Innate Level 8 Soul Power] Levels 10 to 20 will be upgraded every 4 months, followed by one month of slowdown for every 10 levels, and one month for searching for soul rings. 6 Years, 7 months, level 11, 9 years, 8 months, level 21, 13 years, 6 months, level 31, 18 years, 1 month, level 41, 23 years, 5 months, level 51 [Innate seventh-level soul power] Levels 10 to 20 will be upgraded every four and a half months, followed by one month of slowdown for every 10 levels, and one month for each soul ring search. 7 Years old and 11th level, 10 years and 5.5 Months at level 21, 14 years and 8 months at level 31, 19 years and 7.5 Months at level 41, 25 years and 4 months at level 51... The above is an upgrade situation with no shortage of resources and normal cultivation. People like Tang San who practiced Xuantian Kung and went to blacksmithing, and people like Xiao Wu who were just playful and not serious about practicing and had no resources, had no reference value.

The plot is okay, but you go over it yourself and then forget about it after you publish it? See how many you can guess, each chapter is

Damn it, I have nothing to lose. The more I look at it, the more I feel like a coward.

The protagonist is really a loser and a loser. If there is a system, your mother is afraid of this and that. Even calling it nonsense is an insult to the loser.

Canghui College has soul saints. Tianshui College, which is the four-element academy of the Tiandou Empire, actually has no soul saints. Do you think it is reasonable? ? ? ?

I was persuaded to quit in the first few chapters. The top martial soul actually has no soul power. The awakened innate soul power is still a plug-in that increases one level every year. He only has level 7 soul power at the age of 6. What kind of useless protagonist? He releases poison at the beginning.

As for the two women who got re-matched, there is no trace at all. They are selling sheep over dogs.

The main character in this book is too cowardly and takes away the fairy grass. Xiao Wu is captured by the Seven Treasures Sect. Wait until Tang San reaches level 30 to intervene and prevent him from getting the Eight Spider Spears. Based on Tang San's journey in the original book, if he joins Shrek in the soul master competition, he can't get the skull or has to fight to the next level. Then Tang San's pseudo-innate soul power will have to be cultivated for at least 10 years before he can become the soul king, and it may be more than 10 years. Learn the hammer technique from Tang Hao, get the soul bone of his mother, awaken the Blue Silver Emperor, and the realm of the Killing City. These 10 years are enough for the protagonist to develop, take away the Tiandou national treasure, find and destroy the Blue Silver Forest, even steal the soul bone of his mother, plan the crystal blood dragon ginseng, and even get involved when Bibi Dong hunts down the two Ming dynasties. Unless there is a god who directly kills him, Tang San will not be able to develop in 20 years.

Do you want to kneel down and kowtow to Su Yuntao when there is a Gua Wuhun who will definitely become a god when he awakens? It's interesting.

I suggest you, first, punctuation marks, and sentences, periods, and then write the novel after you finish it.