Lu Mingfei and Seventeen Years Old

Dragons is a book I read very early on. I bought the whole set of physical books and really enjoyed it. Jiangnan's character creation is very solid, but there are too many inconsistencies. How can I put it, it feels like Jiangnan's writing about the dragon clan is more like a hot head, and he started writing without a good framework and conception. This is actually very irresponsible to readers who like the dragon clan. Tragedy is more unforgettable, but who wants to watch tragedy all day long? The bad kid looks so much like me, Xiao Longnu and her senior brother are so well matched, and the girl who spends so much money to ask the boy to stay in her world doesn't even know the boy's name in the end... Everyone in the world will have regrets of this kind, but who wants to leave regrets? The author gave me a wonderful reboot, if not the original work. I hope the author can write better, fill the hole dug by Jiangnan, and give those regrets a happy ending. Hi, I rarely write book reviews. My feelings for the Dragon Clan cannot be clearly expressed in pale and meager words. I hope this review of mine can give the author some encouragement and not give up.

It can be said that this is the Dragon 6 we want to read. Dragon 4 and Dragon 5 are finished as soon as they are written. Although I am a little depressed, I can turn the tide from Dragon 6. It is really unacceptable to rewrite Dragon 4 or something. Everything about the plot of this book is good, but it is not the same as the old thief's writing style. Sometimes the tone of speaking is different, but the rest is really perfect.

What is the purpose of watching Dragon Clan fandom, watching Lu Mingfei kill everyone? Lu Mingfei came from various places? At least that's not the case for me. I'm eager to see Lu Mingfei's growth and youthful flavor. So I like the setting of this book very much, it's very comfortable and not artificial. In my opinion, the biggest advantage of every time traveler is not the system, but the familiarity with the plot. Therefore, Lu Mingfei's efforts in this book seem to be traceable, not empty and boring. So I like this one very much.

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Although the death of Eri Uesugi is very regrettable, I knocked on Lu Ling, Chen Wenwen and Nono all abandoned Lu Mingfei. Only Ling did not give up on him, but Chu Zihang was forgotten by the world in the fourth part. Caesar could not have much friendship with the person who coveted his wife. Both Old Tang and Xia Mi died in the hands of Lu Mingfei. The little devil was strangled by Lu Mingfei's father. In Lu Mingfei's mind, his mother was so called by Lu Mingfei's father. The mistress was shot and seriously injured. Fingel and the old principal Anger will die on the way to Lu Mingfei becoming a god. They will send Lu Mingfei to the throne with their own hands, but the god is lonely. Lu Mingfei can only step on the corpses of his classmates step by step. They are the little devil Anger, Maid Fingel Zero, and the black dragon Nidhogg and old Tang Xia Mi, but they will not be Lu Mingfei. (I didn't read it, I only read the title, it should be that Lu Ling is relatively niche)

I think it's okay. The relationship between Eli Yi and Lu Mingfei feels better between family and friendship. When it comes to love, it's weird, as if it feels like kidnapping a young girl. Also, let's just say that there is some inexplicable quarrel between Chu Zihang and Lu Mingfei😑😑😑

It's very well written, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

In fact, when I first started reading it, I didn't want to read it because there were too many of this type. Because it was about the dragon clan, I had the patience to read it. The title of the book was like reading a rebirth novel and reading the plot with an old man. But seriously, I want to read it. After reading it, whether it is the connection of the plot, the interactive characters that shape the emotions, the gorgeousness of the battle, the emotional collision of the daily novels, it has a unique flavor, and it is worth reading carefully. Finally, the bad boy has grown up, and who doesn't have a bad boy in their heart? Then when there were more than 200 photos. There are some problems with the connection of the plot. Maybe it's pushing the plot too quickly. It seems that my daily writing has been shortened due to some things. The scope of the combat film has also been reduced a bit. But the writing is excellent. The level has not dropped. Still so beautiful. The plot is only sped up, but there is no problem with the connection.

Things I don't like: 1. The plot is incoherent, like several separate unit dramas put together. Or to use an analogy, it's like a copy of a game that has little to do with the main plot (there's not even a main plot, it's all DLC strung together). 2. Part of the plot is a bit long-winded and silly. I haven't been watching it for a long time, but there have been several situations where you have to deal with the enemy with a dead hand (such as elbow strikes, throwing people over and knocking them unconscious, etc.). Is the knife a decoration? If it's just a discussion, that's reasonable, but if the other person wants to kill you and still writes like this, it feels like you're a young person. 3. The writing feels that Lu Mingfei has not changed much, he just knows in advance that the future will be pushed by the current situation. Calmness, firmness, bravery, and decisiveness are not things you use to describe a character, and the character has them. They are things that can only be given to the character by describing the character in terms of language, tone, expression, demeanor, thoughts, etc.! 4. I really hate it when the emotional heart is written like that of a male protagonist in a Japanese comic, hesitant and coy about recognizing and expressing emotions, just like a thief.

Brother author, at present, I feel that the book you wrote is not popular. The reason is that you don't have a background. I've read a lot of Dragon Clan fanfics. I'm in love with this series, but there's nothing that can keep me from jumping while watching it. Yes, but your book even makes me seem a little reluctant to part with it, after all. After reading this, there is no such good work. Those miscellaneous things I don't know how it became more popular than yours. I'll give it to you. Crazy discounts, a good dragon fanfic seems to be a real pleasure, thank you author, come on, dad! 😫😫😘😘