The First Son-in-law of All Times
About This Novel
[New son-in-law article in 2020, new version] Traveling through another world and becoming the son-in-law of a saint, Chen Anzhi expressed dissatisfaction! Awakening the heaven-defying system, I can claim resources from all realms! Bite! Congratulations to the host for obtaining the Heaven and Earth Fire from Emperor Yan Xiao Yan! Bite! Congratulations to the host for obtaining Ye Tiandi's ancient holy body, Tiandi Fist! ... Be a genius, I will be the best in the world! As a son-in-law, I will be the best in the world! (The introduction is weak, read the text, there are millions of high-quality completed novels, quality guaranteed!!)
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Official(172)Scraped 19d ago
There is an illusion
I don't know why, but I always feel that the author will whitewash Jiang Yuechan later. [From the first chapter to the end, I always feel that the protagonist and Jiang Yuechan have a "happy enemy" feeling] Although there are many women in the middle, none of them have the same feeling as the protagonist and Jiang Yuechan. I have such complicated feelings between them. If it is true, I advise the author not to make her too ugly. Otherwise, even if he is cleared later, it will still be a poisonous point. Because now Jiang Yuechan feels to me like a character who can do whatever it takes to achieve the goal, even if she has a bad body. Because there is a paragraph written before about why she agreed to marry Su Jianting. Although this setting is not very poisonous, it is still a little bit poisonous. If it is not dealt with properly, the heroine will be almost useless or the heroine will be replaced. But that doesn't fit the book. Unless, as one reader said, I really got a son-in-law once, but in that case, this book will be useless. [First of all, this is just my personal feeling and my mind.] Also, the author, don't underestimate any poisonous points. Even small poisonous points may make a book useless if not handled well. Small poisonous points often test the author's writing skills even more. Details determine success or failure
The author takes a look at Jiang Yuechan
Jiang Yuechan is the most heroine-like character I have chosen, and she is also the one I hate the most. I really want to kill her, but she is full of heroine vibes, and I don't want to kill her. I love and hate her at the same time. I hope the author can reconcile her with her, but when she does, she must be trained and taught first.
To the author
I don't care whether Jiang Yuechan will be the heroine or not. I just want to tell you whether Jiang Yuechan will be cleared later. You can write the game around her in the beginning. If you don't clear it, you can only be a villain and have no choice. Or you can write it according to the idea of Dou Po. The beginning of Dou Po is also written around the fiancée. In the end, this is purely a personal idea. Thank you.
Xiaobaiwen, old bookworms should not enter. Really
You
One stick a day, I really do. Can't stand it. (•́Ὤ•̀)I'm sore
Although this heroine feels very annoying, she is somehow interesting
Comes with a beautiful photo of Goddess Cai.
I hope the author can work harder and improve
In my eyes, Jiang Yuechan is not worthy of being the heroine. In the chapter written by the author now, Jiang Yuechan is shown as a scheming and arrogant character. After the protagonist defeats Jiang Yuechan, he comes to Jiange and meets the leader of Taixuan Sect. , That is, the dialogue between Jiang Yuechan's father, made me immediately feel that something was wrong. The previous protagonist had a hostile or even hateful attitude towards Jiang Yuechan, but after defeating Jiang Yuechan, he seemed to be a different person, and instead licked Jiang Yuechan. I don't understand this. I hope you can give me an explanation.
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How much does the author hate Qiao Biluo?
Are you the legendary number one?
It's a bit too much fun, haha
I want to complain about some of the poisonous points in this book. First, he often swears. I don't understand that when you write a book, you just write a book. If you use swear words at every turn, it won't make sense. Sometimes there is basically a sentence in each chapter. Although this is an online article, you can be smart and don't use swear words at all times. Second, extremely brainless It's an advantage, but it's also a disadvantage. You said that he can be seen with no brains, and the few pictures I saw of the protagonist don't have any suspicion, but this is too much brainlessness, and it is not consistent with this identity. The elder of the outer sect can be regarded as an elder after all. The co-author doesn't even know why the protagonist is a debtor-in-law? It would be even more amazing to put the protagonist outside the house instead of letting him live alone. The most important thing is that since he is just a tool, he can only be controlled. Why should the protagonist be in debt? Oh, this is brainless, forget it, there are only so many comments. If anyone can see it, please help me to comment so that the author can change it.
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Official(172)Scraped 19d ago
There is an illusion
I don't know why, but I always feel that the author will whitewash Jiang Yuechan later. [From the first chapter to the end, I always feel that the protagonist and Jiang Yuechan have a "happy enemy" feeling] Although there are many women in the middle, none of them have the same feeling as the protagonist and Jiang Yuechan. I have such complicated feelings between them. If it is true, I advise the author not to make her too ugly. Otherwise, even if he is cleared later, it will still be a poisonous point. Because now Jiang Yuechan feels to me like a character who can do whatever it takes to achieve the goal, even if she has a bad body. Because there is a paragraph written before about why she agreed to marry Su Jianting. Although this setting is not very poisonous, it is still a little bit poisonous. If it is not dealt with properly, the heroine will be almost useless or the heroine will be replaced. But that doesn't fit the book. Unless, as one reader said, I really got a son-in-law once, but in that case, this book will be useless. [First of all, this is just my personal feeling and my mind.] Also, the author, don't underestimate any poisonous points. Even small poisonous points may make a book useless if not handled well. Small poisonous points often test the author's writing skills even more. Details determine success or failure
The author takes a look at Jiang Yuechan
Jiang Yuechan is the most heroine-like character I have chosen, and she is also the one I hate the most. I really want to kill her, but she is full of heroine vibes, and I don't want to kill her. I love and hate her at the same time. I hope the author can reconcile her with her, but when she does, she must be trained and taught first.
To the author
I don't care whether Jiang Yuechan will be the heroine or not. I just want to tell you whether Jiang Yuechan will be cleared later. You can write the game around her in the beginning. If you don't clear it, you can only be a villain and have no choice. Or you can write it according to the idea of Dou Po. The beginning of Dou Po is also written around the fiancée. In the end, this is purely a personal idea. Thank you.
Xiaobaiwen, old bookworms should not enter. Really
You
One stick a day, I really do. Can't stand it. (•́Ὤ•̀)I'm sore
Although this heroine feels very annoying, she is somehow interesting
Comes with a beautiful photo of Goddess Cai.
I hope the author can work harder and improve
In my eyes, Jiang Yuechan is not worthy of being the heroine. In the chapter written by the author now, Jiang Yuechan is shown as a scheming and arrogant character. After the protagonist defeats Jiang Yuechan, he comes to Jiange and meets the leader of Taixuan Sect. , That is, the dialogue between Jiang Yuechan's father, made me immediately feel that something was wrong. The previous protagonist had a hostile or even hateful attitude towards Jiang Yuechan, but after defeating Jiang Yuechan, he seemed to be a different person, and instead licked Jiang Yuechan. I don't understand this. I hope you can give me an explanation.
Click on the picture
Please share it. . . . . . . . .
How much does the author hate Qiao Biluo?
Are you the legendary number one?
It's a bit too much fun, haha
I want to complain about some of the poisonous points in this book. First, he often swears. I don't understand that when you write a book, you just write a book. If you use swear words at every turn, it won't make sense. Sometimes there is basically a sentence in each chapter. Although this is an online article, you can be smart and don't use swear words at all times. Second, extremely brainless It's an advantage, but it's also a disadvantage. You said that he can be seen with no brains, and the few pictures I saw of the protagonist don't have any suspicion, but this is too much brainlessness, and it is not consistent with this identity. The elder of the outer sect can be regarded as an elder after all. The co-author doesn't even know why the protagonist is a debtor-in-law? It would be even more amazing to put the protagonist outside the house instead of letting him live alone. The most important thing is that since he is just a tool, he can only be controlled. Why should the protagonist be in debt? Oh, this is brainless, forget it, there are only so many comments. If anyone can see it, please help me to comment so that the author can change it.
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