The Great Disciple of Xiaoyao Sect in Online Games

Your writing is so attractive to me, your content is so clever, and it's really beautiful. It's like a piece of softness floating around in front of my eyes. It makes me obsessed and I can't help myself.

This book gave me a different vision. I really enjoyed reading it. I was so happy to encounter your work. I never tire of reading it. Must give a five-star rating, great

The writing is smooth, the content is humorous, and the plot is smooth, but damn, what I read is an online game novel, not a martial arts novel. What is the ratio of your silver coins to soft girl coins? What is it? What is your level? What is it? What about your attributes? How much? What level of equipment is the soft sword heavy sword given by Lonely Sword? What color is the external skill of child labor? Can there be more system elements?

Whoever can type the word "Xiaoyao", I recognize as his father!

There are just some loopholes. How could Ximengua know Xiao Sanxiao but not know that Xu Fu is Emperor Shitian? The character Mo Taichong is a bit transparent and the most embarrassing. At the beginning, he was familiar with martial arts novels and was similar to an intelligence officer in the team. Later, he was useless and didn't know anything about Feng Yun!

After reading more than 440 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. Forget it about brother and sister. After all, in the end, there will be no blood relationship at all. You originally wrote that you and the heroine NPC can only be close friends, right? What will happen to Wang Yuyan, Huanwen and Shifei Xuan later? The Pig's Knuckle team is all awesome, and every skill can be played in seconds. The RMB warriors can be abused and played casually, and the Pig's Knuckle sister is very good at the next level. What game does your family run? Pig's Knuckle is tied with Dongfang Invincible before reaching level 50? Did Dongfang Bubai practice his skills in vain for so many years? There is no logic at all! Game NPCs are too casual. It seems that you are not setting the game to run autonomously and intelligently, right? After all, the Tianlong plot you wrote earlier can be changed by the developer at will!

The eternal dream of literati and knights, His reputation has been passed down through generations. The storm in the world is beyond my generation, Have no regrets in this life and be happy

I now seriously suspect that the author is a girl-loving boy. I have now read Chapter 148 and found that each of the women is better than the last, just like his sister. How lucky are they all the time? And that Ai Mengmeng, who has three purple books and pig's feet? He has nothing, just some shabby things. He has abandoned the book and can't read it anymore.

From midnight last night to today, I stayed up late to read more than 400 chapters. However, only then did I realize that the writing was not even as good as the first half, and the logic was gone. From the beginning it was fascinating to the end, it turned into a short article and even had many poisonous points. I felt a little disappointed. I have no interest in reading the later ones and have abandoned the book.

The martial arts writing is quite good, but as an online game, this novel made me a little embarrassed. For example, when the protagonist leaves Ruyang Palace, Zhao Min actually asks where he is going every time. In this case, if the intimacy is high, he has to tell you where he is going. Then there is no way to play the game. At least half of the time, a person is not in the martial arts, and later in the novel, the protagonist kills those martial arts masters like cutting melons. , I just want to say that the level of the leaders of those martial arts sects is definitely not low. According to the nature of the game, you will not be able to hit millions of health points in a few hits. It is impossible to calculate the equipment data. I am not saying that writing novels is not good, but there are many places in online games that are not rigorous enough. I have been reading for a long time, and these things are stuck in my throat. I want to say it out, but if you don't like it, don't complain! ! !