
Invincible from the Heavenly Palace
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He came from chaos, took charge of the jade butterfly, and returned to the road of supremeness! My sword will drink the enemy's blood! My heart will slay the soul of the enemy! The road is dangerous and difficult, and you will be crushed all the way!
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Official(181)Scraped 11d ago
Thank you all for your support!
I hope book friends will be happy every day
Please, author, please update more. It's so slow that I can't hold on any longer. . . Sometimes I forget to watch it
Fang Yi, in his previous life, he was a great emperor who was respected by countless cultivators, commanding the Huntian Dan Palace to shine brightly throughout the Hunyuan Realm. Because of one thing, I traveled through time to a frail person.
Word limit, my humble opinion
Fang Yi is reborn as the great emperor, and there is too little description of revenge, which can be said to be passed over in one stroke (the highlight is the appearance of the confidante, but the settings for this confidante are vague), lacking the thinking mode of the superior, and lack of emotional description. The confidante's only relic is regarded as It has become a tool for rise. I personally think that pig's trotters are not good to eat. Some emotional descriptions can be added. Secondly, there is no future setting for the confidante. Does the relic protect a hope of resurrection when the owner is lost? Then, the sword radiance of the sword in the palm is described. Isn't pig's trotters an alchemy emperor? Why is his martial arts ability so strong? Not to mention that you suddenly come to a leapfrog challenge, but also the entire high-end sword radiance. Sword radiance is used as a standard for sword users to get started with the sword. Sister, to put it nicely, it's called the attitude of an emperor, but to put it badly, it's called stupid. What's even more annoying is that the author has no development intention in this regard. It's true that Chinese people pay attention to returning fallen leaves to their roots, but this is a complimentary term, not a derogatory term. A corrupt family actually threatened to recognize their ancestors and return them to their ancestors, and actually succeeded. This is something I never expected. For example, let's take a corrupt family.
Fantasy?
Nowadays, there is no other starting point for fantasy novels except rebirth. Invincible all the way through rebirth? Does it mean that you can't write novels without rebirth? Rebirth novels are all mentally retarded novels, rubbish novels, with exaggerated content and poor plots.
I have been following up and the writing is very in line with my taste. I think the author will write better and better. From every chapter, I can find the progress and sublimation of the writing. Come on💪
It is recommended to update a hundred chapters a day hahaha, it is a bit tiring to follow it every day. Can I ask what time this is updated every day? I come to see it several times every day. . . The result is just one chapter.
Does Fang Yi's emotional line revolve around Emperor Ling Xia? After all, Emperor Ling Xia was Fang Yi's only confidante in his previous life, and the one who sacrificed himself to save Fang Yi!
What else do you think of this? I don't know what the author thinks. This is a new book. It's been like this since the beginning. After waiting for a week, 6 chapters have been updated. I suggest you stop writing it. No matter how good your writing is, it's useless.
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Official(181)Scraped 11d ago
Thank you all for your support!
I hope book friends will be happy every day
Please, author, please update more. It's so slow that I can't hold on any longer. . . Sometimes I forget to watch it
Fang Yi, in his previous life, he was a great emperor who was respected by countless cultivators, commanding the Huntian Dan Palace to shine brightly throughout the Hunyuan Realm. Because of one thing, I traveled through time to a frail person.
Word limit, my humble opinion
Fang Yi is reborn as the great emperor, and there is too little description of revenge, which can be said to be passed over in one stroke (the highlight is the appearance of the confidante, but the settings for this confidante are vague), lacking the thinking mode of the superior, and lack of emotional description. The confidante's only relic is regarded as It has become a tool for rise. I personally think that pig's trotters are not good to eat. Some emotional descriptions can be added. Secondly, there is no future setting for the confidante. Does the relic protect a hope of resurrection when the owner is lost? Then, the sword radiance of the sword in the palm is described. Isn't pig's trotters an alchemy emperor? Why is his martial arts ability so strong? Not to mention that you suddenly come to a leapfrog challenge, but also the entire high-end sword radiance. Sword radiance is used as a standard for sword users to get started with the sword. Sister, to put it nicely, it's called the attitude of an emperor, but to put it badly, it's called stupid. What's even more annoying is that the author has no development intention in this regard. It's true that Chinese people pay attention to returning fallen leaves to their roots, but this is a complimentary term, not a derogatory term. A corrupt family actually threatened to recognize their ancestors and return them to their ancestors, and actually succeeded. This is something I never expected. For example, let's take a corrupt family.
Fantasy?
Nowadays, there is no other starting point for fantasy novels except rebirth. Invincible all the way through rebirth? Does it mean that you can't write novels without rebirth? Rebirth novels are all mentally retarded novels, rubbish novels, with exaggerated content and poor plots.
I have been following up and the writing is very in line with my taste. I think the author will write better and better. From every chapter, I can find the progress and sublimation of the writing. Come on💪
It is recommended to update a hundred chapters a day hahaha, it is a bit tiring to follow it every day. Can I ask what time this is updated every day? I come to see it several times every day. . . The result is just one chapter.
Does Fang Yi's emotional line revolve around Emperor Ling Xia? After all, Emperor Ling Xia was Fang Yi's only confidante in his previous life, and the one who sacrificed himself to save Fang Yi!
What else do you think of this? I don't know what the author thinks. This is a new book. It's been like this since the beginning. After waiting for a week, 6 chapters have been updated. I suggest you stop writing it. No matter how good your writing is, it's useless.










